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@ellette-giselle

Yeah, we didn’t either, cuz we’re going on a trip today so we didn’t want to be tired.

Also, I’m mildly jealous that you consider waking up at 6 to be ‘sleeping in’, lol 😅

@highscribeofaetherium

Afraid not. I danced until eleven and then went to bed so I could still be up early. I slept in until 6:00

@ellette-giselle

Happy new year!

Did you stay up til midnight?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

well, it’s 2025, but I have one section left to post, so I think I kinda did it….. in a kinda didn’t way. lolololol.

Keep an eye out as I shall be posting THE END of TVON today!

2025!!!!!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!

@rae

YOU DREW CALVIN! I LOVE IT!

I’m not sure what time zone you all are but HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!

@hybridlore

Happy Almost New Year! I’m staying up till midnight, which I normally do anyway, and playing a game with my brother. My family just watched A Christmas Story for the first time, so that was fun! Are you making any New Year’s resolutions this year? I’m working on my list.

Happy Almost New Year! What are you guys up to?

@keilah-h

Aww, your relationship with your brother sounds so sweet.

@elishavet-pidyon

Same—we played with our stuffed animals too. We had maybe thirty of them between us, and they all belonged to a “pack” with an alpha, and a beta, etc. (Me and my sister were Erin Hunter fans.) We acted out whole storylines—probably enough to fill a novel xD.

@keilah-h

You know you’re a writer when you see the google search “synonyms of the word ‘undisturbed'” and a list of synonyms appear unbidden in your mind.

….unperturbed, anyone? Unruffled?

@smiley

Hi! I’m Stephie. *shakes your hand vigorously* Nice to meet you!

I like writing poetry, short stories, novels, essays about topics like how spiders are beneficial (I did that once in English and that weekend my sisters and I spent ten minutes screaming about a spider in our bedroom) etc, etc, you know the drill.

It’s great to see some…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow, that’s really cool. Definitely keep them in then.

@keilah-h

Yes, it’s supposed to be fictionalized early church. I read Foxes Book of Martyrs, The Martyrs Mirror, and Acts before I wrote these, so I draw a lot out of those. In fact, a lot of the situations are real from real people’s accounts.

@hybridlore

Some I wrote, some are old, old hymns from the underground church.

@hybridlore

Thank you so much for the feedback! I loved this! It’s super helpful.

Side note: interestingly enough, you said that the second book is your least favorite, while I’ve preferred it so far to the first one. We’ll see how the third and fourth compare.

You know what, Aaron will always be my favorite character, but I’m growing to lik…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wait, you wrote the hymns? I thought you had just pasted them in. 😳

(There’s a lot of hymns I’m not familiar with, since we don’t normally sing them at my church.)

@keilah-h

same! It hurts! But I like to keep the story real.

@ellette-giselle

I finished! (And the art for the cover is really cool.) I gave answering those questions a shot, even though you might be past the point of feedback, I figured you might want to hear what I thought.

Were the characters believable?

For the most part, yes. At times, there was somewhat stilted (slightly forced seeming, or maybe a…[Read more]