@whalekeeper
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol
Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?
I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll
Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h
So…I just wrote this scene and i was wondering if it’s a little weird that I call the guy ‘Father’ all the time instead of giving him a real name. He isn’t a priest and he isn’t even Baron’s biological father. The reason I don’t give him a real name is that Baron doesn’t know what his real name is, he…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now
How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.
We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
by the way you did finish the fic right?
Oh dear, I forgot to tell you with CWW and going back to school, sorry!
I really really liked the ending! It was so sweet. My only criticism would be I kinda didn’t understand fully what was going on before that point, Otherwise, it was great!
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (she says like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
H: Oh yeah, and you were humming “Fly me to the moon” three days ago and I’m sure you did it where I could hear on purpose, because you know I like that style of music and it’s the song that first got me thinking that maybe you liked me back.
S: When ya threw a chair at me while I was practicin’ the sax outside?
H: Yeah, exactly.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Aw :/ so sad *cries*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Do you have a pinterest account? If you’re logged in it should work.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @anyone-else
If you want to know what things in my book look like, like people, places, etc, here’s a link to my pinterest! I have a lot of boards with pictures that describe several characters and races in my book!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yeah, he’s pretty cool!!!!!!!! <3 I love Xandro
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yay!
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
ugh, idk what to rp. Last time Silvanis and I talked, he was criticizing my out-loud reading skills and i told him to stop talking.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@Ellette-Giselle Okay, so it’s not the first chapter yet (that’s not moving on for some reason) but I wrote the Prologue to the WIP I was talking about.
Prologue
A secret is a terrible thing.
Aliena let the door fall closed behind her with a weary thud.
“Your wife is resting, my lord. You have a beautiful son.”
The man sat down on the edge of…
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Loopy replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper I’ll be too busy to write the rest of this week, but thanks! Visiting my brother’s family tomorrow and Saturday. But I have six more years left to join. :]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon You’re not alone. I had to look up what grade 10 yr olds are in for Brea, and I wasn’t homeschooled XD
Brea (the library)
“People say that he and I look a lot alike, but I don’t see it because he’s a boy and also old.” Brea did a little hair toss, letting her black curls bounce against her shoulder. Then she fu…[Read more]
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