@whalekeeper
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Koshka replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
*whimpers*
I’m struggling too right now. Just trying to make the time to write, and then when I do I find myself staring blankly at the page wondering why anything but my WIP will write bit not the WIP…
*Sighs*
I’ve also only finished first drafts for short stories, not a novel yet. Which is something I’m hoping to change this year but life.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@loopylynn
Ooops. Sorry. This makes sense.
*Nods*
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@koshka Hold on, I think everyone (at least the active people) needs to agree to move to the next day first. There are people role playing inside where there’s light, but no not during day yet.
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c
Is it alright with everyone if we move on to the next day?
I think we could fudge the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I think some of the others already were RPing as daytime too anyway…?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I kind of made it day. It’s like when Joshua had the sun and moon stand still….talk about taking verses out of reference.
Sorry, I realized I didn’t tag you in the intro RP.
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, so we’re going to wait for it become day?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I think I already know them. =)
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Do you want a description of Rax and Ben?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Syph
This building was big. A high arched door way soared overhead, long tendrils of ivy climbing up the span. The little sprite sucked in a fortifying breath and placed one foot on the threshold. Come on you guppie.
It was just a building. And people. Way too many people that towered like overgrown Wingless. He shuddered and forced his ot…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Awesome! I’ll stick him outside the school (and let’s say it’s like, 7:30 am).
Also, he’s a character I made up for my sister’s story, so she has the right to correct me on things, or adjust stuff that doesn’t fit as she likes.
Description
Sypher is a water sprite. He is tall for his people at 4 feet 5 inches (
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Alright! Sounds good!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, actually….how would Rac like to meet a character of mine? We’d have to jump it to the morning (night time aught to be over by now anyway), but if you’d like I’ll throw Syph in.
Rae’s Alpha might actually like to meet him too….
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper
Do have an idea of where I may insert Rax and Ben somewhere? (Don’t worry Ellette, I’ll make sure that Rax doesn’t burnanate everything XD)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Leo
“Thank you, Leo.”
The words were soft–Leo almost didn’t hear them. He looked up from repacking the first aid kit to see Rory’s face disappear farther into his pillow. The comforter rose and fell in a deep sigh, then fell into a steady, even rhythm.
Leo smiled. Whispered a “Goodnight, God bless you,” and s…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow
And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks!! So glad you like it! 😁 And hey, if you have tips, I know you’re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Want a picture of him? (It’s when he’s older in the actual novel that he’s in.)
Rory
Rory curled up, letting his face disappear under the comforter. It was warm and soft. Unlike the military blankets he was used to. He wondered if this was what clouds felt like. Then he shuddered. He knew what clouds felt…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
I don’t think @the_lost-journal was saying that the teachings of the saints are superior to the Bible. I think he meant that they were another source of instruction.
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