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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh, I get it. I thought Quinton was the name.
Okay….. hmm. This’ll be interesting. Your grandmother is a woman of good taste when it comes to names if I do say so myself.
If Kleins and Roland aren’t important to the story anymore, spending too much time with them may only make the reader disappointed when they are left b…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Uh…. not really. It’s kind of a mess.
So wait, how many brothers are there. I got Julian, Roland, Adrian, and Quinton, (almost because I had a Quin)
Are there two or three more?
I was kind of surprised that Leon and Julian are headed out since for both of the previous books, the protagonists just ended up staying with…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
That was so good!!! I’m so worried about Baron now. 😢 He can’t die; I like him too much!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
okay thanks! I’ll think about it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
That makes sense! Jsyk, you don’t have to participate in everything, but they do offer a lot of different challenges and things for people who can do them. I didn’t even make my goal last time (
embarrassingly so xD) because of school and homework. But I still had a ton of fun! It’s okay if you can’t do it, though. I underst…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
okay, well I may wait until next time. i have a tone of stuff going on. We’ll see. 😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Yay!! The camp opens this Wednesday, but it doesn’t officially start until March 1.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
h ttps://kingsdaughterswritingcamp.com/
I did it last year for the first time in November and liked it a lot. Everyone sets a goal for the month, and spends the rest of the months cheering each other on, sharing excerpts from their WIPs, and doing challenges. Esther and I should be in the Chickadee tent this year, so if you’re i…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 Â Nice lizard! How old are you now?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
what is it?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Technically I borrowed them from King’s Daughters Writing Camp. But yes xDBy the way, that’s starting soon. You should sign up for it! It’s like CWW but for a whole month. And only for girls. @esther-c and I should be doing it.
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HighScribe posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
“I was around small children, so I got small children-ed. It’s when you’re around small children and they give you all their diseases.” – Illustration teacher.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
haha! And you made the rules if I remember correctly….. XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Ahhh. Forgot about the double-rethrow rule. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
You threw ten at me, now I threw twenty back.
The 50 I’ve been saving for a
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*sputters, wipes snow off face*
How . . . what . . .Â
where did you get all those snowballs?XD*strides off and makes a mental note to finish math so I can start writing*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I wrote 500 words.
I wrote 700 to be exact, but I’ll save those.
I shall now snowball you!!!!
SNOWBALL X20
AND
YOU HAVE TO WRITE IN YOUR WIP COLOR OF HOPE OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH 50 SNOWBALLS!
SO.
THERE.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
HYBRIDLORE!! I’ve missed you!!! (even though we’ve still be talking while I was gone. XD)
XD Same here, haha!
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