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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
True, true 😂
And it has a lot to do with–––––
You’re just going to leave me hanging? XD
Ahh, gotcha.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yay!!! *dance of victory*
😂😂😂 Talk about a rude awakening!
Lolol.
Well, Leon was hit in the face!!
I’m interested in Leon’s backstory more now. He seems to be hiding something from Julian and the others. It will be interesting to see him go back to where he used to fight.
idk if I’d say hiding it as much as hates to talk abo…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Great section!! I think you pulled it off. It doesn’t feel too odd or confusing. We are told when the time is passing by, and given a few details, and then the winter is over.
and the other down Julian’s back while he lay sleeping.
😂😂😂 Talk about a rude awakening!
I’m interested in Leon’s backstory more now. He seems to be hidi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Imperial Winters are not very exciting, so I’m going to try to cover the whole time in this next section. We’ll see if I can pull it off.
The fifteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 2nd
The EmpireEarly this morning, I wa…
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HighScribe replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@anyone
I learned yesterday that we’re going to have a friend stay at our house all day next Saturday so I don’t think I’ll be able to join.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Well, I’m guessing someone is going to get thrown into a colosseum. You have five guys there…some of them are bound to get hurt…or killed. It just has to happen.
*shocked gasp* what have I ever done to my characters to make you think such dreadful things!
They technically don’t have a “Colosseum”. Just arenas and amphi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
lolol.
So, any thoughts on the third section? You only mentioned the first and second.
Any guesses concerning the future?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
haha! I was hoping to pull it off! I’ve never drawn anyone quite like her. I’m so happy you like her!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
That section from Aelic reminds me so much of the “Winter King”! So far, I think his salvation story was the best! Well, there weren’t that many details concerning Roland and the others… anyway, that’s what I think.
Funny thing is, I wrote this first, so when I read that I was thinking “this sounds so much like Aelic!” LOL
I’m…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m sorry, that sounds really hard. You were able to find a doctor that seemed like she knew what she was doing, right? Have they been able to figure out different ways to help you?
Thanks. Unfortunately she didn’t feel qualified to take my case and sent me to the clinic where she learned and they messed up pretty bad. I improved a l…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
It looks like we’ll be at a church training thing this Saturday, so I probably won’t be able to join. That said, you’re welcome to send an email link, and if I happen to be free I’ll bounce on.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Violin would be easier to learn coming from a pianist background! But yeah, I understand if you already have too many instruments.
I will say that it’s hardest in the beginning, probably. When you are just starting out, it’s hard to get it to sound good. But if you can stick with it for a few months, it gets better. 😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, it’s so weird because basically all they’re getting is the character’s personality and description in-book . . . also moodboards, which probably influenced it a lot xD But still, it’s cool seeing other people’s imaginations on paper.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Right. Just make sure to give the readers some regular scenes too, so that there’s a blend between time jumps and regular speed. But you’ve already done this in the sections we’ve read, so just keep it up. 😜
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
well thanks!
hmm, I guess we see her differently, but I love being able to see how others picture my character.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
I imagine her with darker eyes and probably looking a little younger, but you did pretty well. 😁
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