@whalekeeper
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I read through it and loved it! I think it will really touch the heart of whoever is going to read it. Don’t let the enemy convince you otherwise. If the Holy Spirit is calling you to do this, you can do it. He’ll give you the strength.
My favorites were Story #2, #3, #5, and #6. For order, I would suggest maybe putting the…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
Same. XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Thank you soooo much girl…
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
Sara, that sounds like a great idea!! I’ll try to read through it and give some feedback if I have any. You’ve got this!! -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Really?? tysmmm that means a lot <3
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Andrew replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Great! Thanks! 🙂
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Just curious, what’s with your current signature? The other mother never said that… Also she’s a creepy villainous monster…
Sorry, I’m just confused lol
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Andrew replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@grcr I request your services
Name: Rax
Age: 17-18
Personality: Fun, lighthearted, playful. Often smiling in comfortable settings.
Appearance: Tall. His hair is a gray ash color, except for when his hair is on fire, and is tied back in a man-bun. His skin is a tan-ish color. Along the back of his hand to his elbow are runes that look like…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
DO IT! THIS IS SO COOL!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@keilah-h
I know!!! *watches it again and dies.* -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@raxforge
I know right!! XD -
Andrew replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle that hilarious XDXDXD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@the_lost-journal @raxforge @linus-smallprint @keilah-h
I thought of you peoples in particular when my dad sent this to me.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Leon, Julian, and the others were finally able to escape the crowd and Leon retreated to the inn at once. He hurried up the stairs and into the room Julian shared with him.
Julian took the stairs two at a time and crashed through the door. “The White Knight?” he fairly shouted.
Leon sat down on the edge of the bed with his back to Jul…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
You got it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah…I think mostly I need to write like two more pieces, and then it’s just editing the rest. So hopefully this is doable XDXD *hopefully**
I think I just need enthusiastic pep talking right now, but emailing would help a lot too!!!
That’s totally fine!!! Just don’t let me give up lollll
That’s the main thing I’m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh my goodness! GO FOR IT GIRL!
I’ll do what I can, but I just sat down and stared at the wall and considered the amount of things I must get done this week…. so I may not be able to read everything. BUT! I will try to post encouragement and breathe down your nekc every day until Thursday. XD!
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
*Cracks knuckles*
First off, that sounds awesome.
Second, Thursday? That’s a pretty tight crunch, but you can do this. Right? Right.
I’ll read through and give what thoughts I have ect. and (if you’d like) typos/errors I catch. What type of accountability do you want? I can email you daily, you can email me, whatever you…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Also, this isn’t going to be a novel. More like a collection of works that intertwine somehow.
I mainly just need accountability, but I would love your guys’ thoughts because I want this to be GOOD!!! It is going to a silent auction after all hahahaha
SO please tear it apart as well XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@esther-c @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @rae @freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @theducktator @theshadow @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @keilah-h @anyone-else-i’m-blanking
I’m doing something drastic.
Something crazy.
I suppose I shall start at the beginning…
Our youth…[Read more]
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