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@loppylin @anyoneelse

Also, I don’t think I remember what your characters look like either?

Here’s a pre-written description of Rax:

Rax was a tall, tan skinned man. His eyes were light blue, filled with emotion. He had long grey hair often tied into a manbun. His clothes were baggy, pants and shirt, but he wore no shoes. On his arms were t…

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@raxforge @loopylin

Syph

Understanding, a starburst of clarity, washed over his face. “You mean–the boys dance with the girls? Not against them? Why, that’s such a Wingless thing to do–” he squinted over at Rax. “Oh, sorry. No offence meant to the present company.”

The young sprite looked down, twisting a wisp of mist around his finger as a c…[Read more]

And Ed (except her hair is in a ponytail)

this is Ellie

@raxforge Just realized I never told you what my characters look like.

So they’re both aliens, but look mostly human except for their tails and some other features. They’re about 14-15yrs old (I haven’t really decided still), but they might look even younger because they’re only a little over 3 feet tall.

I’ll post some drawings too.

Also, I…[Read more]

I like fire, so I have a MC who is a pyromancer :}

*blinks a couple of times* … *blinks a couple more times*

I had to go so far to try and find the last Sypher and Twins RPs XD. I guess that’s what I get for not being on for almost a week (I should probably read up on what Alpha and Dante are doing since there seems to be a lot of noise coming from over there… 👀👀👀)

@loopylin @koshka

Rax and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That makes sense. I bet you’re really good at writing villains lol

Despite acting like he has a death wish, though, Dante doesn’t actually want to make Alpha any more angry than he is now. He doesn’t hate Alpha at all or want to hurt him. He took the knife because he was scared, and would have tried to defend himself if Alpha…[Read more]

@rae

Should I put a picture of Emmie in Alpha’s pocket or would that be too mean?

DO IT!!! Alpha would be so mad XD

Tip for everyone: learn how to fight, this will make writing fight scenes much better (sorry Ruth, that might be very helpful for you)

@the_lost-journal

Sorry for not responding sooner, I was on a missionary trip to our sister church in Uganda.

What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation?

I am not against the idea, I actually support it in a sense. Though, I think it should not just be isolated to your priest/pastor. but to trustworthy friends and family as well. Talk…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

okay hahahaha sounds good lol

@ellette-giselle

If Nar is his sister, he’s going to be furious that his new enemy is carrying around pictures of his sister. If Nar is a crush then he’s going to be really mad because it doesn’t seem like he would want everyone in kingdom come to know that he carries around her picture.

Nar is his sister, and he is very protective of her.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

no I haven’t!!!

Doesn’t everyone have at least a fragment of virtue though? (Sorry, I don’t mean to shut down everything you’re saying, this is just my thoughts. 😅) I’m not saying they have to be someone that the readers will look up to and be like, “Oh my word I want to be just like them.” I understand mankind is sinful and there probably are people out there t…

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@esther-c

Now, you mentioned your characters not knowing God. And I liked how you put that—“without God there is no hope.” But…you have to think that these characters are probably looking for hope, right? Even just an occasional thought of wishing there was a way out of this darkness they’re living in.

So I know with where they’re at right now,…

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@grcr

LOL I love these parts. 💛💛

Aww, thanks! 🥰 Me too 🤪

Would you want to write this differently… ? before I saw the “she drew out her name” part, my mind read it that she spelled it out. (Maybe I’m just crazy…?)

I don’t knowww 😭 I’ve seen it written like that in books before, but I feel like if I changed it to italics it would carry a differe…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 ^^

@theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @savannah-grace2009

Chapter 11! I’m not totally decided if I’ll completely reduce down to one a week in the future, so you may get a few surprise double chapters, but this week there’s only one.

Also, TCoH has become my longest project at just over 33k words and about 100 W…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yay for spring and positive temperatures! But I’m sure somewhere in Canada there’s still snow on the ground. 😉

Outlining, fun. Or not fun. I hope it goes well.