@whalekeeper
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Barnes
When Barnes entered her classroom, none of the students noticed.
The desk layout was in shambles. Some kids had taken marker to board, and drawn creatures only dreamed of by psychotic three -year-olds. Levitated elements and paper airplanes drifted across the room.
“I see you’ve all been busy,” Barnes said. This is going to be a long…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Marcel
“You’re welcome, Celarent.” Marcel winked, although his mouth stayed in a determined line. He pulled his hand back and continued onward.
They made it to class without any more fighting. The room was already full, and a little chaotic, so Marcel had to take a seat by nobody he knew.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ahh, here we go. @loopylin @koshka @raxforge the Twins, Syph, Rax, and Ben are in the same class as I’m going to describe. (It’ll take a couple posts to see what I mean.)
Barnes
Barnes was only a few doors away from her class, when her way was aggressively blocked by another female teacher. Barnes stepped left and right, but was only faced wit…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’m scrolling to find the right tags but my wifi is fried 🫠
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’m not sure. The police told me to call back if I hear anything else. My neighborhood is not a suspicious area – it’s old and very peaceful – but there’s a thick fence behind us, and a large apartment complex beyond. That’s where it probably came from.
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year ago
I’m so glad you brought this back. And I’m glad you spoke up, because I’m writing a protagonist whose speech is very affected by stress, and it’s interesting to read about. How often does your stutter happen? Does it still affect you when you’re alone (if you talk to yourself)?
It’s also fascinating how stutters are similar to tics. I…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I hope they’re okay, too. It sounded like a woman or a child, so I just hope it was an overdramatic kid? …I don’t know.
It was real because my sister heard some of it. I went out to my pitch-black yard and listened for a long time, and even heard faint sobbing in the wind. Very disturbing.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@theducktator @ellette-giselle @loopylin @keilah-h
Sorry for commenting so abruptly, so late – I’m okay! XD I heard bad screams coming from my skylight window. There was some sobbing and yelling for help, and it died away before I could figure out where it was coming from. So we called the police.
I tend to hear weird things in the middle of the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Calling 911 is one of the most adrenaline-pumping experiences ever, especially when you’re a witness to something no one else experienced
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whaley replied to the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I do not know the answers to these questions now, because I do not have Scrivener yet. I’m thinking about buying Scrivener soon, for the sole purpose of shifting my more personally valuable stuff to that.
If you do not get your answers to these questions from somebody else, I will find out the answers from my dad when he helps me. (Yes, I am…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic What were your first written stories about? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year ago
What were your first written stories about?
I don’t know exactly what my first handwritten stories were about. That was much too long ago, and my parents are probably saving them somewhere secret. But I do remember everything past when I first tried to use my dad’s computer. So when I was seven.I used to tell my younger siblings the fantastical…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago
I had to make this after checking my new document

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whaley replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle I like that last one XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
😂
Marcel
“Hey, hey, hey!” Marcel separated the two with a guarding hand. “We will not kill anybody. And I will not allow unnecessary attacks. Do you both understand?”
Hugo
The group passed the lobby bar. Hugo stopped to grab Victor and Lois cups of hot chocolate, and to grab a thermos.They…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Your subconscious must really like papayas. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Yeah, Hugo ran back to our group
@everyone
I want to update Marcel/Mateo/Celarent in a bit, but I am at a Southeast-wide presbytery meeting, and right now, my only purpose in life is to refill food and water pitchers for everybody. It’s worth it. XD But due to my responsibilities, please wait for me to proceed.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I’m assuming you added Sara because writing one female in the group is awkward?
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whaley replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year ago
– What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Mm, probably the general sense of wholesomeness. The stories weren’t deep by YA standards, as YA tends to be emotional and brooding. But the MG novels I enjoyed had, rather, a sense of appreciation for the good things in a kid’s life. And even if bad things were happening to the p…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I don’t know. XD Maybe because I’m KP’s friendly neighborhood psychic.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
No other metroidvania will be able to compete except the og Hollow Knight
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