@whalekeeper
Active 1 day, 8 hours ago- Rank: Chosen One
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Writers can insert two sides of themselves into that conversation and it still tracks. XD
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
I appreciate the thoughts! I hadn’t thought much about items before – although specific things come to mind. My goal is to make this character less of a person to mourn for, and more of a person to enjoy reading about. *Bows and offers you a jar of glitter to poof yourself back home if needed*
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Hey guys, I’ve been thinking. How do you encourage a reader to like a character who is already dead? And with minimal flashbacks? And and without being boringly sad? I have a few ideas, but this has been a challenge so far and I was wondering what everyone else thinks.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Alright, here is my feedback!
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
You know Tyn and Cyrus were my favorites from the previous book. In this book, I enjoyed James and Eric (post-memory wipe), both for their enthusiasm. Iskyagus was fun as well for the brief moment he was there.
~ Were there any c…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months ago
AAHH GUYS
Look. I would watch them anyway to make my guy friend smile, so it’s a win-win for everybody. *Holds out hand to shake on it* I’ll watch em
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months ago
I still haven’t watched Alan Becker, but one of my best friends has always been obsessed and I should watch them for the sake of making him happy. XD I have no doubt they’re good.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months ago
Aaahh the Link drawing! 🤣🤣
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!
The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.
Bruuuhhh
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months, 1 week ago
Sometimes I find a huge piece of paper and doodle on it with my siblings. This time I doodled a frog without really looking, and it came out like this.

It’s an absolute monstrosity and now I don’t trust myself to doodle without paying attention
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 months, 1 week ago
I’ve tried using that designer too. Never got to the same level of detail as Keilah’s characters here. 🙂
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
A few things happened, but it shouldn’t be too much reading, luckily.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Barnes
“Call me Barnes.” She stuck her hands in her pockets. “That being my regular name. Yours?”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
*Is sick and has nothing to do* *Proceeds to spend 2 hours reading the whole thing and summarizing it* Okay, I’ve got a crazy summary for y’all.
Fantasy Adventure RP so far
“Your characters have been summoned to a fantastical world where war rages between an evil Dark Lord and a determined resistance.” – Jonas
On the outskirts of the city…
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
I must confess I was excited to see what Jonas cooked up for the future plot.
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whaley replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Yes, that is alright! Tell me if you need to swap emails or if you have some way to find mine. (I don’t remember everyone who knows my email, lol.)
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
If it helps, I can skim through this roleplay and write a summary so people are caught up on the characters and action. Might be easier for people to hop back in if they want to start this up again. Just say the word, @jonas
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Barnes will find a way back to y’all if Rallascant accepts the trade
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 1 week ago
Done at :01 because I need to get some sleep.
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