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@linus-smallprint

Will keep questions in mind 👍

Glad to hear! Tyn was a character I didn’t like much in the first draft and I was considering changing her a lot until I got near the end of it and she went through some really interesting character development. I think in the draft two versions I understood her more.

I think she’s really fun, but I…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow

I’m going to guess neither of you minds what happens 😛

Barnes

Her sight flooding back to her, Barnes found one of her wrists was held by one of the magical tendrils. Her other hand was free, and Reid was recovering from a hit to the face.

In front of them, the snake lay on the ground. Its eyes faded from blue to a cloudy…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

What kind of feedback are you looking for? Do you want just a chill overview of what I think, or more detailed and critique-ish?

*Bringing this back to the top since Christmas is over* (:

I might post a bunch of stuff on here soon to cope with tearing down my plot board and reconfiguring the whole thing. They say humor is the best coping mechanism.

This definitely applies to ninety percent of story creators, and you can’t convince me otherwise

@savannah_grace2009

I want to get to this eventually! I’m trying to finish a 1,300 page book right now so I’m trying not to read too much else until I do that. XD But I’m still subscribed to this. <3

I’m a third of the way through and I already have a lot of thoughts, so that’s good! I really like Tyn, by the way, favorite character.

@linus-smallprint

I think it is high time I read through everything, that way you get a perspective from someone who doesn’t have to wait for each section and reads it in roughly a couple sittings. 👍

@keilah-h

I mean, if any lizard breed is going to be a fashion icon, it would be a chameleon

@stephie

Pff 🤪

@keilah-h

And that’s not all, you’re also riding a flying broomstick and trying to avoid two perpetually active dodgeballs.

@loopylin

I love that all three of them need stools to reach the counter XD

Plus, they’re expected to get so much done all by themselves, in comparison with all the cafeteria workers. XD

Seb

“Ha, nice. I used to have a white rat when I was five… Or was it a kitten? I could hold it in my hand.” Seb pulled a hand out of the sink and studied…[Read more]

@raxforge

*Takes in a deep breath to explain the game if needed* XD I listen to some of the books over Christmas.

Okay, lol. It’s more of a whole-school-throws-a-party than a dance. I think more than half of the characters are going with friends or by themselves.

@keilah-h

a wild flying car, yikes haha

I always wanted to own that car XD

@keilah-h

Yup, lol

@keilah-h

You know, it was really unclear. Sometimes a wizard will enchant a device or invention, and it will start acting with a personality. One of the main characters has a flying car that quits working for him and lives wild in the forest.

With a Snitch, I think they make it out of robotic parts first, and then they enchant it to fly and zip…[Read more]

“Randy lay there like a slug. It was his only dense.”

– A Christmas Story (one of our holiday movies)

@rae

Actually, I had nothing to post for a few days so I kinda just forgot about KP, and took a break… now I’m back with drawings Andrew really wants me to post, and writings about Baron, and 77 notifications and loads and loads of stuff to read and reply too.

Ur good

@rae @theshadow

Do you guys want to say it magically heals itself, or not? I’m…[Read more]