@whalekeeper
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy leaned forward to study the blaze, rubbing her knuckles against her legs. The charred, moist wall peeled in layers like an old flower bulb. Black, it was already smitten again with dew, and conflicting to look at. The smoke stung her eyes, sweet and bitter.
She took a breath with her sleeve in her face and gagged. She’d have t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy choked down a sound. The gray tendrils wandered towards her, bewitching as colorless fields in the morning, but with more life than those.
Thoughts returned in a rush. Hadn’t the nameless man pulled her away? He stood between her and the writhing wall.
In the next instant, she made up her mind. She emptied her pockets and…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Little fire.
Hehe, that’s got a good ring to it
In case you forgot what Gabriel looked like, just replace the gauze with petal-shaped birthmark.
Gotcha. Last art I saw was with a mask so I didn’t get a proper look. Nice art, by the way!
I will reply in an hour or so btw. My family’s on a LotR marathon and I’m quite overstimulated by the act…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
My concern is tempered by the fact that most people in this story get stabbed. 🤣 And you’re right, he can’t have perfect HP all the time if he’s a chaotic good character.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
His vision cleared, and he looked down to see the large gash in his side from Ace’s knife.
Noooo, what happened?? He deserves a lot of things but he doesn’t deserve to die
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
If Marcel was the other team captain, I think the other team would have to target him. 😂 He’d love that, go right ahead
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
He sounded exactly like the far field workers who were sent to asylums.
“You’re crazy,” Lucy whispered.
She turned inward, so her knees pressed against his chest, and kicked hard. The man grunted and loosened his grip, just enough for Lucy to roll out and onto the ground.
Air burst from her lungs and she gasped for breath. The g…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
I’ll join PE in a little bit!
I know our group of boys is there already but this class includes all the high schoolers, right? Marcel would be a fun character in PE by nature
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
Lucy wiped her nose and crossed her arms again. “I d… hm, don’t know who that is. Barn. A barn?”
All around her, the foliage was dark and unfamiliar. None of it looked like home. She began to pant, a sense of dread building.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
My goodness, she’s such a cute child!
Glad you like her! I love Lu from the beginning to the end of her timeline. Even if a nine-year-old isn’t a super complicated character lol
lol, I’d like to see that.
It might happen anyway
About the voices, that’s the maze messing with Gabriel. I shall develop it later on.
Ah, I shall keep that in mind…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
lol, I wasn’t meaning the silksong ending as much as the ending to book series that you compared it to. The ending where the MC dies.
Ah, yes. 😂 MC deaths are a hit-or-miss but the emotions were similar to when the trope works. Maybe because I was afraid for her death.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Part of me is picturing a little girl pout, but she’s too frightened for that
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
The rune over Gabriel’s eye on his mask does have strange sight properties, so that works!
Something told me he has magical intuition :]
Lucille
The man spoke. Lucy’s heart dropped. The voice belonged to a stranger.
For a long time, she didn’t say anything, even though the man’s voice was urgent. Fury temporarily warmed her body. Her h…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
From the Silksong soundtrack, I like Strive, Lace, Greymoor, Bellhart, Widow, Hunter’s Trail, Bilewater, and Choral Chambers. Although it’s all good.
I’ll shut up about my obsession
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
THAT’S THE BEST ENDING IN THE WORLD!!! I LOVE THAT KIND OF ENDING!!!!!!!!!
I love the game. XD It was actually wasn’t a satisfying end by any means, because the protagonist kills a monarch and takes their place, essentially becoming a mindless entity and doing what she was bred to do.
But the game mechanics suggest that it is …[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Man, I am really not communicating today. I forgot to say Barnes is magically transformed by the labyrinth. She is now a child. Her age is magically reversed, so she’s maybe nine or ten?
We can say Gabriel can see through the magic for an instant and realize it’s Barnes; not to mention she’s wearing the same jacket.
Thank you for savin…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Also good to have you back!
Okay, let’s see. We’re gonna do that fun thing where the character switches their name
Lucille
The girl stood tangled within the wall. Small and sleepy, one side of her ached to curl up in the leaves and let them whisper tendrils of mist into her body for as long as she lived. She could be another lifeless par…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
No problem at all, all of those things are fine. Also my characters change all the time, seems to be a product of roleplaying and testing things out.
Aw, the special little Sebster Gangster
😛
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whaley replied to the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Actually yes, I should continue this! My fault entirely for dropping it. I’ll post something tomorrow.
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