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@theducktator

Wyoh, may your dad always get beard hair all over the sink that you clean.

Noooooo… PTSD… 😭

@rae

To clarify, this scene comes before the last one I shared.

Oh, okay. I couldn’t tell, but it seemed like Nahim potentially told Mandin something in between these two scenes, so I assumed they were in order. Got it 😊

I feel like Nahim’s backstory is an important secret that he doesn’t talk about. But couldn’t Mandin research what happens t…[Read more]

@loopylin

I doodled the twins and Dante! As friends because they need to be friends.

<img class="alignleft" src="https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui_temp/es5cy2x8bwrtam7d4o77m4s13m3nd34e.jpeg__ez.queue.addFile('/tardisrocinante/vitals.js&#039;, '/tardisrocinante/vitals.js?gcb=0&cb=4', false, ['/parsonsmaize/mulvane.js'], true, false,…[Read more]

Watch out y’all, space princess coming through

Me: *Gets super stressed out and overemotional over the relationships in my life, and other people’s problems*

Dad, sitting next to me: You’re like that alien girl from that movie… Space Heroes? Galaxy Guardians?

Me: *Sniffs* You mean Mantis?

Dad: Yeah. *Wiggles fingers over his head* With the freaky bug things.

Me: *Gets overly enthusiastic in philosophy class*

Teacher: Time to move on…

Me: B-But we’re not done!!

A particularly charismatic boy: *Leans back in his chair, casually smiling at me through half-lidded sparkly eyes* You. Me. Lunch break. Kierkegaard.

@rae

Anything works with me! It may take a lot to convince Winston to do anything out of his little bubble but I will do the best I can.

@kathleenramm

My hero… *bows and offers you the sword of the legendary Kingdom Keeper*

@rae

Oki, I read it!

Overall, I think it’s well-paced and has a great amount of description. I could understand the basic setting and tech even though it isn’t my own world or story. The ship’s name, The Nightmare, automatically makes me want to root for it XD

I especially liked Mandin’s appearance! You used body language, but almost more im…[Read more]

I’m BACK BABY!!!

*aHem*

Just glad the posts are working again!

@kathleenramm

*Takes a deep gasp after rising from the dark chasm of silence*

Thank you!! I appreciate your dedication with tech, which I do not have 🙂 Hopefully your magical powers will bring us great prosperity in the future.

…Hopefully this post comes through??

@loopylin @rae

Let’s try this again for the millionth time y’all

Sebzter

Seb stood in between Eddie and Dante, and put his hands on his hips. “I said mingle, not strangle. What’s the beef?”

HELP

Wyoh’s messing with me big time… (this is a test)

@rae

Helloooo, I’m heeeeere

1. Feels like average length to me! Then again it isn’t in book format on KP, and is one continuous page, so I may be gauging it incorrectly. I think if it’s 2-3 pages long on your document, that feels adequate.

2. If it’s the end of a chapter, it works as a summary. If not, I don’t think it’s too abrupt to have in…[Read more]

@rae

Maybe they have to find a special macguffin in the middle of this fairy tale land, that will effectively send them back home? Like Oz? And creatures keep attacking them to protect the special artifact? Just spitting ideas here lol.