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@rae

It’s good! It gives a very clear picture of what’s happening, and how guilty Nahim is, while also confirming that the author knows it isn’t Nahim’s fault. Gives a clear picture of how his mindset needs to change.

Also Barnes doesn’t have to be there all the time, and she can’t be in two places at once so she won’t eliminate all the fighting opportunities in the story. I just felt like there could be some adult character to balance out all the chaos whenever we need her.

@ellette-giselle

I figured if any other agents pop up, it’s Barnes’ responsibility as a new authority, so she’s going to attempt wiping them out as soon as possible. But if they don’t appear then she will just do a sweep of the school and everything will be fine. It’s your call.

@rae @raxforge

Marcel

Alpha and Rax whispered a little, and didn’t notice Barnes heading for the door. “Since you are so eager to catch the bad guys,” she threw over her shoulder, “why don’t you lead me to the rest of them?”

@ellette-giselle

I think he wants some indication of where any remaining agents are.

@raxforge @rae

Marcel

“There’s a difference between fighting for something important and looking for a fight. As for the pain part, you shouldn’t want to hurt anybody. That’s the difference between a hero and a sadist who coincidentally saves somebody.” She didn’t move, gauging their expressions.

My interest is also piqued so… XD

@raxforge @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle

Marcel

“One, don’t go looking for fights; two, someone who is innocent might get hurt,” Barnes said. “You may leave now, but I want to see the kids who were being attacked as soon as possible.”

@rae @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle

Marcel

The woman nodded and turned her attention. “Did you see this happen, Marcel?”

The winged boy looked up at her incredulously. “You know who I am?”

“To make it easy: who among the catalog of students do you think I would know about the most?”

“Ha, okay… I didn’t see the fight happen. These guys…[Read more]

@rae @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle

Marcel

The tall woman looked at Alpha and Rax, who had stopped talking. Marcel could swear she raised an eyebrow under the mask. “Whichever one of you is Alpha Grath, please explain what happened.”

@loopylin

Hehehe… This is way too accurate, I doubt anyone is going to keep the students in line.

@the_lost-journal

I would join, but my character is very humanoid. Basically just a human with fur and horns.

@raxforge

Sure. Everyone from that floor just went to the lobby, most of them left because they had nothing to do with it, and my new character is about to interrogate y’all. Make sense?

@rae @raxforge

I see your conversation went on lol, I should have waited a little longer. Pretend the post I made before you actually happened now.

@rae @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle

Assuming everyone went downstairs

Marcel

Marcel sat down on the floor again, and crossed his arms on a coffee table, tucking his face into them.

The police began questioning the kids before they could get settled any longer. Those who were unassociated with the killing had been in class together. They…[Read more]

@rae @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle

It’s high time the adults did something. I am about to add a useful adult character.

Marcel

The healing helped the pain somewhat, and Marcel got to his feet. Before he could speak, a voice blared through the ceiling speakers. “All students in the north wing of level three, evacuate for your own safety.…[Read more]

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Marcel

Marcel put his head between his legs and took some deep breaths. His vision began to fail again. “Don’t call me Bird Boy… It’s Marcel. You guys should stop taking matters into your own hands and find a police station.”

@rae

Alpha is looking like a “love the darkness” enneagram 4 right now, that’s really funny to me. 😂

@raxforge @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle

Marcel

This was getting confusing. “Why would you heal him if you were trying to kill him and you’re still trying to? And why do you want to kill him?”

@rae @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle

Marcel

The man explained. Marcel’s face eased, and he stood back up, the throbs of pain returning. He crossed his wings in front of him in a defensive gesture.

Only then did he notice the other guy bowing on the floor.

“You can get up,” Marcel urged. The idea of someone serving him was rather…[Read more]