WalkByFaith

@jonas

That’s a great idea! The problem is, on my google account I have, it’s my school account and the docs I make can’t be shared with anyone else that has a non school account. I will, however now post the link to my “reedsy” account, (it’s like google docs, but no one can edit or comment.

h ttps://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ Copy and paste…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

@sarafini

I forgot to mention that most of the things that you’ll find wrong with this thread have already been mentioned by others and have been either fixed or the chapters deleted and replaced.

I deleted the paragraphs about the races, and fixed multiple other problems. Maybe I need to make a new thread for the new and improved WIP, lol.

@spinner4him

Yess!!! Read and reread them, they’re amazing. My family might be starting the first one as a read aloud, too! 😁 I’ve been trying to get my siblings to read them forever. Who’s your favorite character?

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t really know much about abuse effects or anything like that other than I’ve read in books, thankfully. One thing I would ask is, is it absolutely necessary to the plot/character? Because I think that can really easily become a cliched, sort of stereotypical in books, so if you’re just throwing it in there to make the…[Read more]

@hanako

Hi Nevaeh! It’s nice to meet you!

I’m hybridlore on here, or just Hybrid, a Christian, violinist, and sci-fi/dystopian writer. I’m also a homeschooler and enjoy doing lots of things! 😁

Okay, maybe you can revive the nonfiction section on here… I don’t know exactly what’s going on over there, but I don’t think it’s used very often.…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Yeah, I definitely like viola better, because of the sound, I guess. I don’t really know, but it just fits me better.

Yeah, I get that. It’s really similar to violin, just a little deeper, right? I don’t think you have an E string.

My inspiration for my WIP was a bunch of different books and one of my friends, who loves to imagine a…

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@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, I’m using mani/mahnith. Thanks!

@sarafini

I know you asked me to tag you, so here’s the “thread” about my current WIP! If you read through all the comments (a daunting task, and don’t do it unless you REALLY WANT TO), you will find exerpts from my novel that I have revised and/or have replaced other chapters.

Sorry this…[Read more]

@sarafini

Okay!

@janellebelovedpig

I agree that it’s the best to have your parents’ on board about the topics you write about but I just don’t really have that. For example, my mom is very sensitive to reading about sad things, so she puts herself in the character’s place when she reads my stories, and it’s just hard for her to read. Same with…[Read more]

@grcr

YAY YOU’RE BACK WE MISSED YOU!!!!! 🙂

@acancello

Thanks! 🙂

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr

“Here,” Kari stepped closer to Ottoline and offered her her hand. “Pretend I’m the boy, and you’re the girl. The boy holds out his hand like so and asks, may I have this dance?” They both burst out laughing as Kari mocked Hugo’s deep voice. “

🤣 Thats great.

I will see if I have time to write a piece today!

@hanako

Hi! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions &#x1f60…[Read more]

Hi, Sara! (I’m Janelle, I don’t know that I’ve introduced myself to you yet.)
I don’t know if this is helpful or not, but perhaps try describing the incident vaguely or skip it over and mainly focus on the effects of the incident, rather than the horribleness of that moment. I’m thankful to not know firsthand the horribleness of physical abuse and…[Read more]

@trailblazer @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello (i think I got everyone?)

Ottoline

“Hold still!” Kari giggled as Ottoline dramatically dodged the wand of mascara.

“I’m sorry,” Ottoline laughed, “I’m not used to having people touch my face.” Well, that wasn’t entirely true. She had been struck multiple times, but never had her…[Read more]

@sarafini

I have not heard of Nanowrimo, so I cant give you any advice 🙂 But thanks for inviting me!

@thearcaneaxiom

I love this! Though it does get confusing, it’s the “good” kind, lol, and I would totally read the book.

@mineralizedwritings @esther-c

Yeah I did say only one character, but if you really, really want to add another one, I suppose you can, just for everyone else please only one charrie, because if everyone adds too this would be super chaotic.

@sarafini

Sara!! HI!! I missed you!🤗! How are you doing?