Raegan Aubrey

@jonas

I feel like I just went…XD Rae went too…so I think its either you or HighScribe’s turn. Unless you really don’t want to, lol

@jonas

I’ll just go.

@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium

Glace

Turning around and forgetting about Fracture, Glace walked down the hallways at a swift pace. He didn’t care if the others followed him or not, as long as they didn’t ask any questions about if he had a family or home.

He didn’t want to have to remember those words that…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’m glad I was able to help!

@freedomwriter76

You’re welcome.

I’m lost for words right now, something about some character entering my mind and taking it over to make me cry. (Thank you so much Riker.)

@freedomwriter76

Riker! (I am going to adopt your charrie now!)

How girl? How do you get your mood boards soooo perfect?

@freedomwriter76

EVERY SINGLE TIME I READ YOUR STUFF, I CRY! I only wish I could do that.

Riker!!! Another character that if I start to get to know, he’ll start talking to me. He reminds me of Chace Duke as far as childhood. *I’m crying*

(Ugh, how am I supposed to type when I can barely see?)

I LOVE IT!!!!!!! 💕

@esther-c

Woops, sorry, that got posted to soon.

Anyways, as I was saying, I like it and you can tell Ami is good friends with Ev.

I don’t think you need an action opening, this introduces your characters nicely and captured me, which is what you want in a first chapter. From my gleaning of info on fist chapters, you want one, above all,…[Read more]

@esther-c

I like it. At some parts it made me laugh, and you definitely portrayed a healthy family (something I never say no to in books) and with the part about the donut and Ev…I was thinking how I would like my crush to do that! XD even though I’ve never had a donut before in my life, and am most likely allergic to it, I would eat it just…[Read more]

@jonas

Would you like to do the honors of chewing out Nahim and Zahlin, if @highscribeofaetherium is okay with it?

Btw the Queen’s presence is needed cuz she’s what they have for a healer, that and the obvious…

@highscribeofaetherium

Sorry it took so long, I didn’t know exactly what to write so whatever is there is what I’ve got.

@highscribeofaetherium

Nahim

Zahlin grasped his hand and pulled him up.

“Peace of Honor.” Nahim wasn’t going to say that you were supposed to grab the wrist, bu t it bothered him inside. He hung his sword off his belt as Zahlin slumped against the wall breathing heavily, blood coming from a few wounds. That was when Nahim himself realized he…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Hold on…typing up RP’s now

@highscribeofaetherium

how do you guys write them so fast? 😅

When I get in a mood, it’s like doing freestyle in a speedo as fast as you can. I also had to type out a lot of things last year and I decided to just get used to typing in this age of tech. Believe me it used to take two minutes per sentence!

@jonas

Give me a few minutes to get my brain jogging…

@highscribeofaetherium

Is Zahlin going to answer or are you not sure you want them to have Peace of Honor?

(And yes, for the past week or so, I’ve been silently reading this topic)

@freedomwriter76

*I compose myself after reading something about Bucky*

My love of Bucky was so contagious I legit spread it to other people, ok? XD

You weren’t kidding. Though, it should be present tense and OVER THE INTERNET TO SOMEONE YOU’VE NEVER SEEN BEFORE IN YOUR LIFE!!!!!

Bucky pretended to topple over when they landed more blows of the…

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@fernweh_grace

I happened to stumble upon this by chance….and I’m glad I did! Your writing is beautiful! It’s so sad….but beautiful! (you should publish this…)

@esther-c

I read the chapter, and I think I see what you mean.

I wouldn’t say that your problem is the lack of action. I think the way you opened with the painting scene is a great introduction. It introduces Ami’s character, how she’s artistic, what she values, what kind of person she is. So it definitely doesn’t need more action. The way you…[Read more]