Raegan Aubrey

@keilah-h

Don’t worry, I’m not inclined to get gory. It’s basically just gonna be threats.

@whalekeeper

Okay, makes sense.

@whalekeeper

So…

Alpha’s part was okay. Not perfect, but okay.

I’m not sure how they’d block his powers, since the only way to do that effectively is make him very tired, but Alpha has an extreme immunity to basically anything so…it’d take more than half of a vile to do that unless it was some super potion, but whatever. It doesn’t matter…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I never meant to say that I didn’t approve of young marriage! I meant that I think it shouldn’t be taken lightly. I agree with Whaley that it is not a sin, it just needs to be well thought out.

Young age does NOT cause divorce. I meant to say that if you are married young on impulse and you didn’t think it through, then it’s…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Chapters 9 and 10 should now be on the docs.

Just note I really do not like chapter 9, and I’m just bearing with it right now cuz I’m not sure exactly how I want to change it.

@keilah-h

He doesn’t have an Australian accent, he just always wears an Australian army slouch hat for whatever reason.

His name is Sergeant Sam Troy, played by Christopher George. He leads a small band of three other men, who all together make up the Rat Patrol. and he’s not the only one who wears a weird hat for no apparent reason. Hitch wears…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I want to know how long it took you to draw your Marvel one. It’s just so perfect!

@keilah-h

I figured out who that drawing reminds me of!

This guy:

He’s from a tv show called the Rat Patrol that I used to enjoy. Can you see the resemblance?

@keilah-h @theshadow @theducktator @princesachronicle22

Callyn

“Honestly, it makes a lot of sense now.” Evelyn slipped her hand into Callum’s.

“Yeah, but can you imagine my father’s reaction when he hears this? He’s gonna flip!”

Speaking of Silvanis flipping, would you guys mind if I experimented going a little crazier with Silvanis? The…[Read more]

@esther-c

That’s okay.

Offer’s open if you ever want to.

@hybridlore

Mandin and Nahim’s relationship is probably my favorite part. I enjoyed reading it a lot.

That’s good to hear! Those parts are usually the best parts to write. Of the two characters, who do you like better?

I’ll probably have the ninth chapter ready soon.

I don’t want to hurt anyone’s feelings. But I didn’t want to ignore what was said. I felt it was better to point out, instead of ignoring it. I’ve had conversations with multiple people from different backgrounds, and we tend to leave with more perspective than when we came. That was part of my intention, but I guess many people don’t have the…

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@ellette-giselle

You don’t have to answer anything I said…we can be done lol

I swear I wasn’t trying to argue…

Sara just gets confused and carried away sometimes so I’m sorry :/

@keilah-h

Yeah, I know.

That’s why I think we’re kind of done XD XD I did NOT mean for this to get blown up like this…

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

WHOA WHOA WHOA I DID NOT MEAN TO START A FIGHT.

Yeah that’s what I’m feeling too…XD I feel like actually horrible :/

but it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants.

I second that.

I wasn’t attacking your story or telling you you should change it…I just wanted to discuss this  a little bit because I love…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m not in any way trying to get you to believe how I believe! You don’t have to accept anything we’re saying…and I’m sorry if I made you feel that way. I think me and Whaley just like talking about stuff like this and we just saw this as an interesting topic to discuss.

It’s okay if you want to end it and I’m not going to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whether or not the marriage lasts, it’s important to have a healthy relationship with your partner. If the marriage lasts but it is a bad relationship, I would say it was a bad decision to get married.

Yes! I feel the same way!

It is possible to have a healthy marriage at a young age. You can do it. It is just hard to have a good o…

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@ellette-giselle

well I’ve read a TON of books about Christian marriages and Biblical courtship/dating and I have never read that! Plus, I have witnessed a TON of beautiful marriages that started very young and have gone on for years!

Okay. I’m sorry if I’ve offended you! I’m just telling you my perspective.

I’m not saying that ALL young m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay okay okay

Nevermind

XD

That’s just my personal opinion lol. I’m not saying you should do that, I was just saying how I feel. I don’t know…I just really really hate the idea of people getting married young, and I’m not sure why. So you do what you want with your story! See, this is why I need to stop looking at your book…[Read more]

I know I said I was going to leave, but I’m just bored lol!

also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.

I agree with Keilah.

I know your story is set in medieval times, so th…[Read more]