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Ruth replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
I just have to show you this…

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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
My Character:
Nahim (nay-him) Alfred Nayhelm
gender: Masculine
Eye color: Red
Hair color: black
Skin Shade: pale brown or little a little b little a little b (abab) to anyone who understands that.
Voice: It has been described as “Young, too young” and “the voice of a thirteen-year-old”
Age in my WIP: 19-21
Height: about 6 feet.
People/…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi! I’m RAE or you can call me Ru or Ruee
I’m a blue-eyed girl who’s insane about horses, passionate about writing, loves her God, plays the piano, dabbles in poetry and machine embroidery, and reaches for the sky…But hasn’t reached it yet. I’m a homeschooler with a big imagination at the age of fourteen. Good to meet you. **Hand shake**…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
That’s a great idea! The problem is, on my google account I have, it’s my school account and the docs I make can’t be shared with anyone else that has a non school account. I will, however now post the link to my “reedsy” account, (it’s like google docs, but no one can edit or comment.
h ttps://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ Copy and paste…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I forgot to mention that most of the things that you’ll find wrong with this thread have already been mentioned by others and have been either fixed or the chapters deleted and replaced.
I deleted the paragraphs about the races, and fixed multiple other problems. Maybe I need to make a new thread for the new and improved WIP, lol.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 11 months ago
@euodia-vision Love your location on your profile, lol!
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
Love the pic! How do you get that detailing in the hair!!!? I’ve been trying to do that for like years!
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks, it’s my most recent watercolor of my MC, Nahim (pronounce nay-him never nah-him)
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago

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Ruth started the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi. I’m RAE. You can call me Ru or Ruee, whichever.
I’m writing a book called Guardian Angels, a space story, and I would like some criticism on it. By the way, when I do ‘dialogue’ It means he’s thinking that, not saying it. Here is the first chapter…
CHAPTER 1 LAXAN
Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava drooled red into the city streets. R…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
**indebted-to-you smile of joy**
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Ruth replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi. I’m not much for intros, but I’m a blue-eyed girl who’s insane about horses, passionate about writing, loves her God, plays the piano, dabbles in poetry and machine embroidery, and reaches for the sky…But hasn’t reached it yet. I’m a homeschooler with a big imagination at the age of fourteen. Good to meet you. **Hand…[Read more]
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hanako replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
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hanako replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Hello Janessa, nice to meet you!
Yes I do like history! Mainly American, probably around the time of the preacher Jonathan Edwards (18th century).
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay, I’m using mani/mahnith. Thanks!
I know you asked me to tag you, so here’s the “thread” about my current WIP! If you read through all the comments (a daunting task, and don’t do it unless you REALLY WANT TO), you will find exerpts from my novel that I have revised and/or have replaced other chapters.
Sorry this…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay!
I agree that it’s the best to have your parents’ on board about the topics you write about but I just don’t really have that. For example, my mom is very sensitive to reading about sad things, so she puts herself in the character’s place when she reads my stories, and it’s just hard for her to read. Same with…[Read more]
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hanako replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Nice to meet you.
Well…non-fiction in the sense that I like to write about my thoughts on American government and real world topics.
I’m working on a essay called American Leader. It’s about the qualities a leader should have and how those qualities are developed. What do you think are leaders born or raised?
One is a whole…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
YAY YOU’RE BACK WE MISSED YOU!!!!! 🙂
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@rae
Why, thank you!!! Do you like Lord of the Rings?
I love your pfp too! Horses are amazinggggg
Do I love lotr? They are my favorite movies and books! Tolkien is my favorite author! I literally did not like books until I read The Hobbit, and I only read that cuz my big brother kept talking about it. Since then, I watched the movies over and over again, plus read the books twice. After I finish school assigned reading, I plan to read them again.
@rae
YUS GIRL!!! *high five*
I’ve only read the books once, but rn I’m working through Lotr a second time. Buuuut, I’ve seen the movies like 8 times. 😂
Do you like books or movies better? And do you like the hobbit or lord of the rings?
I like the books, cuz I appreciate good writing and that was the first book that I cried over only two words, “Aragorn dies” and I’ve never had another book do that to me. I’ve cried over those words twice!
Lord of the Rings, it captures me and Strider was like a game changer for me. i loved his mysterious personality at first.
Awww! 😭 So like the part where it says Aragorn dies of old age?
YES!!! I love Aragorn/Strider!!! Some of my fam thinks he’s weird but he’s my favorite Lotr character, besides Sam ofc.