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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
It gets worse…
Jr holds all his grief up inside, thinking to grieve openly is a weakness. Eventually it turns into anger. He follows the road that his adoptive father followed, with his own twist. He vents all his anger towards his real father, Grathmere, and continues the greatest hatred for Grathmere there ever was.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6
Kid
“No, I’m afraid we haven’t met anyone named Kwin, but we’ll help you find him, I mean, if you’d like us to.” He smiled.
“Uh…no, I don’t need to find him now. I just was wondering if this was another one of his jokes, and if it was, I was going to kill him.” Kid became painfully aware his…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I guess it’s just a VERY LARGE eagle….XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I just looked it up and apparently an eagle can barely carry 20 pounds…..ÂOh, well….it’s fantasy so…….
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Yep, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
i love that scene!!!!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Marcurious
“Rideable?” Marcurious screeched. “If you think I will allow you to ‘ride’ me like a horse, than you are sorely mistaken!” the man glared at him. “Fine. But you will not ride me.”
So Marcurious closed his eyes and changed into a large eagle. Before the man knew what was happening, Marcurious launched up and grabbed the man…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh, and I don’t know what the theme color would be, probably light blue/gray? Idk, you can decide.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Hey, do you want to make another one for Lilitu?
He has black hair with blue streaks in it, he has a twisted foot so he limps a lot. He was saved from the river as a baby because his parents set him adrift to save him from being kidnapped by the Pythonos. He was rescued and adopted by a loving couple. He has a crush on Sef but can’t…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Marcurious
He watched in awe as Vethe was choked by a black vapor. Cool! Well, it wasn’t cool for Vethe, but seriously, those king’s powers were awesome! Except the fact that he almost killed someone, but still…
“Fetch her! You will not, I can,” the king said.
Marcurious seriously did not want to be Vethe right now…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Koshtin
“Fetch her! And you will not, I can.”
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I didn’t want to make a topic for this, but wanted to write it anyways…
The sound of drums seemed to shake the very foundation of the vacation house. Nae looked innocently up the set of winding stairs that led to Jr’s room with her large, childish eyes.
“Da, why is Junior trying to bring the house down with his drums?” Nahim gathered up his…
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Ruth replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay, here is the current headache of the year…
Nahum-Alpha Slit Silvanus Thurston Dare Krogen Fives Grath
Warning, the arrangement may change later and I might add another name!
Now I shall disect his name! Each part has a meaning to his parents (he was their first child, so he got loaded on with meaning)
Nahum-from his father’s adoptive f…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
You guys have already read the next chapter, the one where Lilitu steals the loaf of bread. So I’ll skip to the fourth chapter, when Lilitu’s walking home from his thievery, lol
And as always, don’t feel like you have to read it. I don’t want anybody panicking, lol
Chapter 4: Strange Magick
Lilitu stood at the edge of…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic One More Chance – A Story by R.A.E. in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 9 months ago
Not really a storyline, more like just points.
- Brandt saves Brenna, a slave/his Sweetheart
- Brandt’s leaders and fellows
- Brandt’s mission that he fails, falls and breaks his leg. Wounded.
- Elderly man takes him in, caring for him, not afraid to share beliefs.
- Brandt returns to fellows, overcome with guilt, pain, sorrow, depression,…
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Ruth replied to the topic Oh Arabian, my poetry in the forum Poetry 2 years, 9 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium ↑↑↑
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Ruth replied to the topic Oh Arabian, my poetry in the forum Poetry 2 years, 9 months ago
It’s as a Vow, and It’s as a Rule
A little child’s first cry,
It’s little voice piercing the sky.
It’s as a vow and it’s as a rule,
That life should spring forth fresh and new.
A little toddler with feet so small,
Pads down the grass that is so tall.
It’s as a vow, and it’s as a rule,
That life should be given to you.
 …[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
“A hero is the one who bleeds, red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.”
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Two things. How is your aunt? And how is your Scoliosis going?
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