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@gracie-j

Oh. My. Gosh.  GRACIE!!!!!!!!!!!  That is SOOOOO beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I’m smiling so hard right now that people are gonna ask me what I’m doing, lol!!!!!!!!!!  I cannot believe that–it’s sooooo gorgeous!!!  Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤

@gracie-j

Well, nothing too specific, perhaps about writing scenery and action? But I’m always grateful for any and all tips you have:)

@gracie-j

I just finished it! You are definitely a master with descriptions (do you have any tips on them?) The imagery was so clear, I literally saw everything happening scene by scene:)
Awesome job!

@millennium

Wow! Those lines set up the action straight away:) Awesome!

@writerlexi1216

And it is just way too awesome that Newton gets a whole chapter all to himself!! 😀

@writerlexi1216

(*trying to contain excitement but failing miserably*) I AM SO DEFINITELY GOING TO BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR CHAPTER 2!!! 😀 😀 😀

@godlyfantasy12

That’s awesome!! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Congrats!!!!!!!!  Hope you win too 😉

@writerlexi1216

It was SO AMAZING! AND YES! I DEFINITELY WANT TO READ MORE!! Okay, I gotta stop writing in all caps, but I definitely feel like writing in all caps!!!
Seriously though, I’m even more excited to read more of this story than I was when I waited for the second book of one of my favorite series to come out!

And a chapter from…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

I probably won’t have it started for a while yet, but when I do make one, I’ll be sure and let you know:)

@nova21

That’d be awesome! 🙂

@kayleigh-idea

Sadly, I don’t have a blog yet. Yours is really cool though:)

@devastate-lasting, @abigail-m

Aww, thanks so much guys!!! ❤ I’ll be posting both soon, maybe, hopefully… 😉

@gracie-j

I thought the same thing, lol!!!

@godlyfantasy12

girl, GO FOR IT!!!  You won’t know until you try!!!!! 😉  I personally love high fantasy SOO much and I know you’ll do great!!!!  Just write amazing things for God’s glory– DO YOUR BEST, that’s what He wants us to do!!!!!!!!!!

And I TOTALLY feel you when you say you’re discouraged by…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms

LOL!!!!  That’s exactly what my writing looked like!!!! 😆

Yeah, I agree with everyone else, you’re soooooooooooo close, it’s fine, i think 😉

and besides, you’re now a big part of this forum and it would be so sad if you left!!! 😢

@writerlexi1216

Girl, you got talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Keep sharing PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I NEED to meet Newton now… 😉  The first part got me ABSOLUTELY hooked–and your imagery and metaphors were sooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can’t wait to read the next chapter (hint hint 😉)!!!!!!!!!!!!

@issawriter7

Yes, I loved the starry sky effect and the quote was just too true. 🙂