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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 5 months ago
Ok I love what savannah_grace2009 just said about doing the whole colosseum scene first- that makes a lot of sense!
*sighs in relief* Okay because I was panicking after I posted and then you posted that you really liked the fountain scene…I felt sooo bad lol
Yeah, I overthink a lot xD
As far as the fountain scene, I think you could…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 5 months ago
Awesome!! I’m glad you like the new beginning!
I should have chapter two out here in a few.
Oh good idea. I’ll do that with the thought thing.
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 5 months ago
@elette-giselle
Okay…so I’m going to attempt to give my thoughts.
Just so you know…I haven’t been writing for THAT long…so take everything with a grain of salt…
I just feel bad giving feedback for some reason xDFirst…your revisions did help a lot (I read both the first draft and second rewrite).
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 5 months ago
Ok, thanks! Haha, maybe my brothers and their friends are more wild, but it’s younger or older brother annoying each other around here. lol.
What did you think of the rewrite? was that better? I tried to make a few things a little clearer and also add some action in the beginning. If you still think it doesn’t build enough action…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 months ago
Yes. All the blog posts. sorry for the confusion. lol.
YAY!!! I thought I’d give that a shot and see if that was what y’all meant for me to do. Now that i see it was and how easy it is I bet y’all were laughing because I was making it so over complicated. lol.
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Sara replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Oh wow, your camp sounds so much fun! And wayyy different from ours lol!
Ours is kind of in the middle of nowhere…you’d never expect a camp to be there!
It depends on who is directing the camp that week what kind of teams we have, but normally we are split up into about four to six teams of different colors. Each team has about…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer
*sits in a bean bag chair contentedly watching your conversation with tea and cookies*
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Sara replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
And I’ve noticed the days that I miss it are the days that usually end up with things not going well or I’m in a bad mental state or something.
Me too!!!
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Sara replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
And sometimes when you’re used to hearing Him speak a certain way, God switches it up to get us out of our boxes and teach us how to expand our awareness of Him.
Exactly!!
Our culture also tells us to follow our hearts, but it’s not healthy, because emotions are so up and down- they aren’t stable. I heard a pastor say this once: “Emot…
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Sara replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
I’m not the most emotional person in the world, and especially when I was in middle school, I’d be at summer camp and see everyone around me crying and having these emotional encounters with God, and I would wonder what was wrong with me that I wasn’t “feeling” God like everyone else was.
I completely relate to this! I’ve had emoti…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic God Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Oh wow! That’s so cool!!!!
For me, God’s been teaching me a lot about trusting Him.
I’ve had some people hurt me in the past, and betray me, and it’s just been really hard for me to make friends and fully trust someone.
I went to an amazing Bible camp that I go to every year, and at camp, I always feel sooo close to God! I wa…[Read more]
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Stephie replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 5 months ago
@esther-c @theducktator @folith-feolin @trailblazer @grcr
So it’s been a long time since I posted here and the world has somehow tiptoed into June. I don’t know how. So I’m thinking we should most probably get a move on with our next book. I think I’ll post the forms for suggestions tomorrow. Any thoughts?
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 1 week ago
@trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @grcr @hybridlore @esther-c
Since you guys all prayed for me (for my mental health stuff) I thought you might want to read my status update I posted the other night…it’s about how I overcame that with God’s help and a little about my testimony too!!! If you don’t want to read it, it’s fine xD
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freedom posted a new activity comment 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@trailblazer @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c Thank y’all so much💖💖 (and yesssss, reviews are so helpful, Esther!! Thank you so much, that means a lot more than you know✨🫶💖)
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freedom posted a new activity comment 5 months, 2 weeks ago
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Linus Smallprint started the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium, @theducktator, @theshadow, @grcr, @keilah-h, @trailblazer, @stephie, @theloonyone, @thearcaneaxiom, and anyone else who has come to check this out.
Hello everyone!
I have a fun idea for a challenge to exercise both drawing and writing skills. The idea is this, someone posts a description of a character he or she has yet…[Read more]
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Keilah H. posted an update 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @rae @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @esther-c @grcr
anyone else’s computer refuse to post anything? When I type and hit post, it brings up an error message saying “Error, you reply cannot be empty.” WHAT DO YOU MEAN IT’S EMPTY???? I JUST TYPED SOMETHING!!
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huh, weird. It wasn’t doing that to me… I think… 🤔🤔
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Yeah, it’s really weird.
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Mine is refusing to allow me on to the recent topics page- it just sits and spins and doesn’t do anything.
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I haven’t had trouble posting, but when I get on the site, I have to exit and reenter a couple times cuz otherwise I just get white or an error.
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Hey, anyone else notice that the most recent post with the writing tip and vid link is gone. Is it just my thing playing tricks, or is it gone for you guys too?
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Gone for me too. I was wondering about that.
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oh yeahhhhh, it is!!
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Yeah, it did that for me too!
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I had the spinning problem with the Chat Chat. It went away after a while.
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The forum looked funky a couple days ago, but it’d pretty much back to normal now.
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TheShadow started the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @thearcaneaxiom @theducktator @esther-c @trailblazer @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @keilah-h @loopylin @theloonyone @grcr @anyone
I have a character who’s mostly serious, but I don’t want him to come off as boring and like a cardboard cutout. Does anyone have tips for how to write a serious character without making…[Read more]
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The Ducktator started the topic Summer Bible Reading in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @thearcaneaxiom @jonas @beth-torres @esther-c @trailblazer @theshadow @arcticanimals @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @stephie @grcr @ava-blue @loopylin @theloonyone @anyone @the-sheer-amount-of-effort-it-took-to-remember-all-these-tags-is-embarrassing
So this a great…[Read more]
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