@trailblazer
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 1 month ago
Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?
The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!
I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅
@theducktator Praying!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I’ve been a bit busy lately, so I’ve been paused at chapter 15 for a while. I’m still interested too, just need to start up again… as soon as i get some time.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks for asking!!!!
It’s been a rollercoaster. I have some good days, some bad days, some days where I just want to shut everyone out and not talk to anyone XD
And then I have some days that start out good and then end with me sobbing in my bathroom trying to get ready for bed 😭
The Devil also has been trying to attack me with…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ changed their profile picture 1 year, 1 month ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
Heehee thanks!! 😊
Nothing too interesting actually… lil boy is a foodie, so I wanted him in some kind of restaurant shirt, but I didn’t want to use a real restaurant (mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have).
I guess there is a food truck in, like, the UK or something called the flying fry…[Read more] -
-GRCR- replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh wait is this the book you had started sharing in the Chat Chata while back? That I was reading?
I’ll try to help where I can… I’m not the greatest at editing… or giving feedback… but I’ll do what I can, whenever I have a moment.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Ahh, I love that clip!! 😄 I sure love chill scenes where people/families are just having fun.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle and anyone else
this is just for fun…takes place several years before Freedom’s Fire takes place…and ugh I love it so much😭🫶🏻😂
She ensured Wolfgang and Lee were close enough to get to in case there was an emergency, but not close enough to the creek to get wet.
Reuben tugged on her dress. “Help?”
Eleanor kicked off…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-idk-lol
anyone want a few little snippets from something I’m writing for fun…that probably won’t ever make it into a book but I’m writing it anyways?? 😂
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freedom replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle it’s not much different, haha, mostly just fixing the formatting issues and some grammar and things since a friend offered to be my editor this time🥳
oh and probably a new cover that matches with Broken Shackles more🤭
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freedom posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
not super active here✌🏻✨
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freedom replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle I am insanely busy working with other authors and their project(s) right now😭 (as well as finalizing details for the re-release/2nd edition of Freedom’s Fire…shhh🫢)
I wish I could help, but I don’t want to be too swamped😅 it looks super cool though, and I hope you get the help you need!!
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freedom changed their profile picture 1 year, 1 month ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 1 month ago
The story:
Starlit Night
A Refuge Rangers Short Story
“When was the last time you ate squirrel, Jace?”
Zahn looked up from his third stanza to spot Kyler poking a blackened rodent over the fire. Jace sat on the opposite side of the fire, scribbling away in his leather book. His blond head barely lifted at Kyler’s question.
“You mean th…[Read more]
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Liberty started the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore
Hello girls! I recently completed my first short story from Refuge Rangers! I thought I’d tag you since you’ve all been reviewing the guys moodboards. Here’s an glimpse of their characters in a story! Burd isn’t there…and I’ve yet to post about Zahn and Keiden. But I will soon! Lord…[Read more]
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-GRCR- posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
I may not be very active here. I’m still reading everything you tag me for and I might stalk a bit.
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