@trailblazer
Active 3 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I was too lazy to find the right emojis 😂😂
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Got meself me 100 words.
Now snowballs atttt…. @liberty @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
Welp… I wrote a short story! XD
If you have the time, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it before I show it to friends and family. (It’s kinda long, I apologize, lol. It’s under 11k.)
Tagging some folks just in case you’re interested, but don’t feel obligated to read it. :))
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 [Read more]
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Esther started the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago

Open Eyes
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Amos wiped sweat off his brow with the back of his hand. He pressed against the wall of the synagogue, the stone cooling his hot skin. The voice of the priest droned on through the windows. “But you, O Bethlehem Ephrathah, who are too little to be among the clans of Judah, from you shall come forth for me one who is to be ruler in I…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
We also have a new tradition where we eat a different cuisine for dinner on the three(?) nights leading up to Christmas. Like Mexican, Chinese, pizza, and then on Christmas Eve we eat finger foods so there aren’t a lot of leftovers to leave room in the fridge for left over Christmas dinner. 😋
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Esther replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
Yes ma’am!! Similar to like a lot of people celebrate I think… We never grew up with Santa, so that’s never been a thing (we have nothing against it, of course, we just never “believed” in it as kids). We decorate our house for Christmas the day after Thanksgiving and we set up our Christmas tree (we have wayyyy too many ornaments…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
Thanks ladies!! <33
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae …my four snowballs are coming at ya’… ❄️
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hybridlore replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Cool! I’ve been wanting to read that for a while!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I just did! They look great! Nice to see the pictures of what they look like. Joseph’s was a little blurry… but… I think I saw a picture of him handcuffed against a wall… 😳
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hybridlore replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Sounds good. Third person makes it a lot easier to keep track.
Maybe they’ll just have less important roles. Or maybe they’ll die.
Lol… 😳
getting sidetracked by a good book, I have returned.
Ooh! What book did this happen to be? 🤪
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Good section!!!
Again, you’re summing up lots of time here, especially at the end. I would maybe like to be shown instead of told some of that, but it’s okay if you just really need to get to the next part.
Joseph felt that for once they were safe.
Then, something happened that changed everything.
Oh no… 😥
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-GRCR- posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh me, oh my.
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-GRCR- posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
I won’t be on much today—it’s my lil bro’s birthday. Happy Birthday @ McMuffin! 😜
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I feel like I am everyone’s target. *sigh*
If it’s too much, I can withdraw you from my upcoming snowball list.
Yes! Thanks for tagging me when you post your Crimson stories! I like reading them!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 6 months ago
So, whenever I’m overwhelmed, whether by emotions or circumstances, or just whatever, I have to remind myself that God is there and He cares and wants me to turn to Him for help. I understand it’s not easy for everyone to talk to a God that they can’t physically see or hear, but He’s there, Kefa. He wants you to come to Him wit…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I know the deadline is tomorrow… but is it possible to push it out a week? Perhaps there’s another National Day you can pick?
Are the other participants okay with that?
I have a story I really want to write for the contest, but I’ve been pretty busy so I wasn’t able to write it before the deadline.
If it doesn’t work out, just let me kn…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Aww!! 🥰
So, one question—why would Amelia inherit part of her uncle’s inn? Wouldn’t that usually go to her brothers?
Also, I like that we’re getting more conversations between Joseph and Amelia. However, I feel like they’re all based on future situations—mostly just “what if this happens?” Except for this one:
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Esther replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 6 months ago
Could I suggest something to you that always helps me when I’m feeling overwhelmed?
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