@trailblazer
Active 4 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
The meals worried Leon. Obviously, Hassan was trying to keep them strong and healthy… but to what end?
Okay, when I read this, I was immediately hit with this thought: “They’re going to the arenas.”
Am I correct on this?
“No. Not Really!” Rolf laughed.
That’s funny! I could totally see Leon writing songs and writing. Maybe becau…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
you just love sailor characters. 😝
Yup. I’m not ashamed of it either!! Hmmm…well, being a sailor is a good reason for me to like him, but I really liked him because he was a well-mannered sailor. Many aren’t. I immediately liked him because he was truly trying to help Julian and his friends.
Pfft!! What!! A unicorn! That’s i…
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Esther replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*tiptoes in quiety*
I hath been tagged…
but idk if I was actually ever in this RP 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Excuse me while I go DIE OF CUTENESS. I was literally hopping around squealing, and then ranted about it for five minutes to one of my sisters. Your couples are ADORABLE. I LOVE THEM.
Ahhhh, I’m so glad you love themmm!!! 🥰🥰
(it’s actually kinda funny, my Mom and I recently had a conversation about why me and my siblings are…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*bursts in through the door and tumbles onto the ground* *hops up and dusts self off* Did I hear someone mention ConTEmPoRarY fiCtIOn??? 👀 I’m here for it 😎
First of all, make sure you’re reading contemporary!!! Especially within the little genres that you want to focus on. I can’t stress how helpful this is. I know some authors are l…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I knoww. It does seem to work with his backstory, though. Poor guy. Ten years in slavery…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I like him! He has a funny personality. I think he might become a Christian eventually.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Great section!! It seemed pretty realistic. Oof, Ian’s going to be trouble 😬
I can’t wait for the next one!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Did you hear that one of my characters actually did kill someone in the School RP?
WHATTTT
RUTH NOOOOOOOOOO WHYYY -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I think that Character Party was ONE OF A KIND
And that’s why we can’t ever replicate it
Sadly
But like I think I’m gonna remember it for the rest of my life…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
Thank you! 🥰
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
Thanks!! 🤗
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
Praying for you!! 🙏🏻 💕
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Yeah, that would be a cool scene! I’ll have to try to see if I can fit something like that into the story.
Okay, great! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Organizing My Drafts in the forum Plotting 1 year, 4 months ago
Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂
I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.
I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Yup. Julian got hit hard….
Also, I have a character named Julian as well! He was once a haughty prince…until he got turned into a unicorn. My story was a twist of the “Frog Prince”.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
“For You, God, tested us; You refined us like silver.”
I read that verse today!
The next day, Roland was ready to go on, but there was no sign of Rolf and Leon.
Wow. He’s healing fast. I had a sprain before and it took 2 whole weeks to heal!
Oooh! I love Dian!
“Dian! Kom hier. Ek het jou hulp nodig.”
I think I know what he’s say…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
@theshadow
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