Trailblazer

A neat and sweet story! When I first read it, it seemed your writing was in a different time zone/tense than the italicized beginning. To me, it seemed like the narrative suddenly switched to more present tense…like the character was actually experiencing everything instead of writing it after it had already happened.

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@theducktator

Unfortunately, I don’t think so. Ellette is out of town for the next two weeks, and I have family visiting this week (and I’ll be on vacation next week.) I would imagine that we’ll pick it back up on one of the following Saturdays, unless @savannah_grace2009 or someone else is interested in leading them while we’re gone. I don’t k…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh no, I’m sorry! I’ll be praying for y’all as you travel and try to get things worked out.

We’ll miss you! 😢

@the_lost-journal

Oh…

I just feel bad :/

I don’t like it when I hurt people’s feelings  😥

@keilah-h

yeahhhh lol

I just asked ChatGPT to write a cringy story for me lolll

🔥🔥 THE LEGEND OF SIR BURGERFACE 2: REVENGE OF THE EVIL BROCCOLI KING’S COUSIN’S PET GOLDFISH 🔥🔥
Once upon a time, in the SUPER AWESOME kingdom of Snacktopia, Sir Burgerface was CHILLING on his golden throne made of curly fries, sipping a milkshake of power. Everybody loved him because he…

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@the_lost-journal

…?

oh…

😓

I’m so confused…did I say something wrong? I was just saying that I like your name!!

I’m sorry if something I said hurt your feelings… :/

@keilah-h

also I’m still laughing about “bRiNg a MeLoN” lollll

It’s my favorite thing ever hahaha

@keilah-h

yessss I get like this too, I decide a scene is cringey, but I like it too much to remove it.

YES YES YES YES YESSSSSS

that’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard XDXD

What are they gonna do to Sef’s little sis?

Well…its kinda a long story and it’s gonna give away a lot (I also need to flesh out the plot wayyy more)

When I have all m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…

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@stephie

I HAVE RIZZ

slayyyy

@the_lost-journal

omccc

I like your name!!! It’s so cool!!!

yeah, just like Hybridlore, I didn’t know if it was your real name or not lol…

But it’s so unique and cool!

I’ve been pronouncing it “Kee-fa” *dies laughing*

@ellette-giselle

We’ll have to see!

I love how you always say stuff like that like you have no idea what’s going to actually happen 😂

@the_lost-journal

Is it pronounced keh-fa or kay-fa?

@the_lost-journal

Oh, cool. I meant you didn’t have to answer if you didn’t want to because some people don’t share their names on here, and I didn’t know if it was your real name.

A lot of times people pick fake names or usernames on here for internet safety. Like Rae and Loopy. Obviously Hybridlore isn’t my real name xD

@the_lost-journal

Sometimes KP has weird glitches… the joke around here is that “Wyoh” the “ghost” eats our posts.

@the_lost-journal @anyone @random-stalkers

Okay, uh, yeah. I’ve talked to my mom, and I’ve got a total change of plans. I’m not going to post my writing related to TPE on here. this topic can just fade into oblivion for now. heh… 😅😅😑😅

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good.

Yep. Like two days ago it was 80. In February. 😅 I mean, winter never lasts long here, but still. I’m not looking forward to the summer weather.

He seems like a character. I’m interested to know what he thinks of Leon and Julian and their faith.

@the_lost-journal

Umm… I need to figure some things out. My mom thinks I should use the book as a ref for a comic version of this story, and if I do that I may not need the writing to be edited too much, and if that’s the case then I won’t really be posting on here…… but idk…