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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Out of curiosity, how far are we through the book by now?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.
Also, if Albee is the one to tell him, then we don’t get to see what happens. 🙁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Really know your characters and try to build conflict between them naturally. (There’s probably lots of articles about that, maybe some even on here.) The better you know and understand your characters, the easier writing will feel, especially if you don’t have a super clear plot and are more just following the events of a certain time…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
Hey, I’m a chosen one now! When did that happen?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
*sputters* Then how is Ian ever going to become a Christian? Leon won’t be there to explain it to him, and he probably hasn’t even listened the whole time!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Could you survive in your story's universe? If not, why? If so, how? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 1 month ago
Ooh, great question, @whalekeeper!
My main WIP right now . . . yes, since it’s essentially our world, just in the near future. Although, it will get a little harder as time progresses and the government begins to persecute Christians.
As for my other project, Eidar . . . As long as I had the right equipment. Like Loopy’s world, there are a LOT…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
ELLETTE. You can not leave me like that. Leon can’t die now!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Great section! I too loved the part where they told the children about Jesus. I’m excited to see if/how Leon reaches Ian.
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Esther replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Ohhh, haha, gotcha 🤪
yeah I actually had no idea this was where Wyoh originated!!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
Praying! <33
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ
@keilah-h @whalekeeper @esther-c @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @anyone-else
I JUST WROTE A NEW CHAPTERRR-
oh wow!
so in order to exert his power he needs to steal from her. Interesting.
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yeah, he gets power off of the lies she believes. but she doesn’t know that yet.
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ohhhh! ok that makes sense.
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I feel terrible for her. That life seems excruciating.
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yeah…it is *cries*
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Wait whattt
Iverrrr 🧐-
PLOT TWIST BWAHAHAA
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What’s the twist? I didn’t see a twist, but that might’ve just been me.
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Because TIGIN showed up…the same Pythonos that tried to kill Liv in the desert, and the same Pythonos that held Ottoline captive…he survived the tidal wave and he knows Iver!
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Oh I’d forgotten his name.
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ohhhh okay! so it’s all coming together.
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YESSSSS
bwahahahahha
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Oh my goodness, poor Sef. *is slightly traumatized* Lilitu, save her!
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I KNOWWWWW
XXD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
@the_lost-journal
Praying!! 🙏 -
Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
shooting stones
Do you have an actual game this is based off?
“A story of a great warrior hero who loves children and saves his bride,” Julian repeated. He looked at Roland who gave him a smile. “I think I know just the story.”
Aww!!!😍 I love this part!
“You do that,” Aelic replied coldly.
I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I totally thought you’d be at me for separating them, but I guess you didn’t mind Rolf dropping out of the book.
I was devastated, but it works better with them getting split apart.
So, Rolf never shows up again?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Awesome, thank you!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theshadow
New chapter is out!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
No you weren’t in this RP, but I thought you might want to know the whole story behind Wyoh lolll
Because I think we all forgot it, and we were the ones who came up with it lol
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay, when I read this, I was immediately hit with this thought: “They’re going to the arenas.”
Am I correct on this?
Obviously not.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
The meals worried Leon. Obviously, Hassan was trying to keep them strong and healthy… but to what end?
Okay, when I read this, I was immediately hit with this thought: “They’re going to the arenas.”
Am I correct on this?
“No. Not Really!” Rolf laughed.
That’s funny! I could totally see Leon writing songs and writing. Maybe becau…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
you just love sailor characters. 😝
Yup. I’m not ashamed of it either!! Hmmm…well, being a sailor is a good reason for me to like him, but I really liked him because he was a well-mannered sailor. Many aren’t. I immediately liked him because he was truly trying to help Julian and his friends.
Pfft!! What!! A unicorn! That’s i…
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