Trailblazer

@kyronthearcanin

Oooooh I love that! They definitely seem like a good match. Poor Ev ☹️

Thanks!! 😊

Yes, they are!! 🥰

I know. 😢 But don’t worry, eventually he comes to the truth. (After a long journey, lots of impulsive decisions, someone else’s redemption, Ami’s encouragement and prayer, and a few near-death experiences, though. XD)…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

XDXD But I have a Micah!! His name is Ryan tho. He’s so funny and crazy but really sweet.

Hilarious! 😂

Yeah… there’s… a lot… I could say about our Micah. 😆 But he has no idea I’m talking about him so I should probably stop. 🤣

Cousins are fun. 😊 When we all get together… anything can happen! (Good or bad… &#x1f923…

@kyronthearcanin

This is Amidala! (or just Ami). She’s really sweet but can be sassy. 😉 She’s the one who reminds Ev that he is not a failure. (Because Ev thinks he is because of how his parents treat him. Though he doesn’t try to act like it. 😢) Her struggle is trusting God all the time and relying on Him, instead of relying on herself, those…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Actually, my cousins are sweethearts! The ones I actually interact with, anyway XD.   But I know how some can be lol.

That’s awesome! ☺️

Almost all of my cousins are younger than me. I’ve only got a few who are either my age or older. He’s one of them who’s around my age. He’s crazy. 🤣

@kyronthearcanin

Ikr?! XD XD

Would you like to see his best friend??

(She’s so sweet!)

@godlyfantasy12

😢

Would you be willing to disclose more information? 🤔😅😣

@kyronthearcanin

We don’t have a lot of forests where I live. We’re kind of just surrounded by farmers’ fields, so I guess I’ll have to find somewhere that does. Oooh… What about a forest in the mountains? That would be perfect! 😄

Same here. Suburbs, cities, and farmland. XD

Yes!! It would be!! Our family visited Colorado I think 2 summers ago…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That song sounds so fitting!! When I get the chance I’ll listen to it. 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Actually for after he loses Jocelyn….

Wait, wait, wait…

hold on…

JOCELYN DIES!?!?!

NOOOOO!! She can’t!! I love her!! 😭

@lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76

Y’all are here saying you love the name Micah, and I’m over here like: 😐 “My cousin’s name is Micah.” 🤣 And you know how cousin’s are… 🤣

@freedomwriter76

I could add even more charries for them to join if y’all wanted…🤣

There’s a couple I may need some practice writing. 😜💗

If you want to. 🤣

I know @godlyfantasy12, @princesachronicle22 and I were a group that had Des, Fynn, and Sky in it. If they are willing to pick up that group again, then I’m fine with that. I’m okay with you…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

1. Any other country… Good question! I’m going to have to go with Israel, I think? Because I would get to see some of the places where Jesus walked!

That would be so cool!! I used to really want to visit Israel (and I still do), but I really want to visit Ireland/Northern Ireland now because of the scenery and the accents. &#x…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Yep! I understand! 🙂

@keilah-h

If you’re bored writing a story, that doesn’t mean it’s a bad chapter. It might mean you’re getting tired of the project and need to work on another one for a little until you get new ideas! Or, if you think a scene is getting boring or useless for your charries/readers, insert some foreshadowing for what’ll come later.

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@freedomwriter76

Ahh, I have not!!! 😭😮😔 So sorry about that!!! Will/Ev were going to find a frozen dragon or something…right??? 😅

Naw, you’re good. 😊

Sure! Lol XD Whatever you want do. 😁

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else-I-missed

Is there any group for Destry, Fyn…[Read more]

Hello and welcome, @kyronthearcanin!!

(Somehow I missed it when @thearcaneaxiom tagged me. : )

Anywho…

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amateur writer!!

My WIP is ya dystopian, but I have tons of ideas for stories in other genres!

Fantasy sounds really awesome!! I tried fantasy a whi…[Read more]

Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen, @light-warrior-pen!! (Hey, it rhymed. 😂)

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amateur writer!!

I love incorporating crime, humor, and romance in my writing. I also love showing Christ in my writing in unique ways, but I need a lot of work in that area!

I would t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

LOVE IT!!!

The boys as, well… boys, lol, was so adorable to read!!

I love writing my charries as little kids!! 🥰

@thearcaneaxiom

I see what you mean. That’s a really good point.

For my situation specifically, I may have to change the chapter a bit. It is in my second draft and never existed in the first draft. In the first draft, they learn this information over time, but it’s unnatural. In the second draft, they learn a little bit at once, but it see…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I do actually have a question.

So, I understand that people can join the groups to become one of the people who critique others’ work, but how do you become the one who gets their work critiqued? Do you have to be published on KP to get critiqued?