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@ellette-giselle

Exactly.

@ellette-giselle

Yikes. Poor Jonathan.

@rae

Thanks for the update!! I’ll keep praying!

How have you been feeling?

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters!

Amber and James both have tough backstories…

Be careful out there, fellow writers 👀😂

@ellette-giselle

Evan’s story is crazy. He must sympathize with Jonathan a lot.

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, they sound adorable! Sir Fluffyface is such a cute name 🤣

Name them after characters. That’s always a solid choice. 😉

@linus-smallprint @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Four new chapters today! 😳

Don’t feel like you have to read them all right away if you don’t have time. This is the end of Part 2.

@ellette-giselle

I do agree with the people who commented on the end of this last chapter; there probably should be some more context before they teach him how to fight.

But I liked the training sessions. 🙂

@keilah-h

Yes on all three! He has a brother-in-arms, but a blood brother.

@rae Oh, weird! I hope the blood tests/supplements are able to help. I’ll be praying!

@esther-c

Oh, gotcha! I’m glad it’s fixed!

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters!

Thank you again!

@jonas

That works! 😅😁

@jonas

oh…

ok thank you!!

Other than that I’m good with it!! Sorry…

what kind of feedback am I supposed to be giving?

@jonas

oh no! Did I not put that I had planned on sharing for feedback? 😑 It’s ok if it’s too late or anything.