Trailblazer

@ellette-giselle

Your advice is so so helpful!!

And it drew attention to a weaker part of my book—my FMC identifying the lie she’s been believing and accepting the truth. That turn-around moment is a part I’m still working on, so you pointing that out is awesome. I think right now she’s just been living this lie without experiencing any consequ…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

600+? That’s… a lot of characters… You’ve got a lot of patience.

lol yeah… 😅 it never feels like that many though, when I sort them into the friend groups and families they belong in.

How long did it take you to do just those 28?

Ignoring my week-long moments of procrastination… about two days or so. I frequently forgot abo…[Read more]

@everyone

Saw this a few days ago… Looks like some moderator profiles were active. The KP profile has posts from ten years ago 💀,  it the captain one has no posts at all.

I am working on drawing all my 600+ peoples alphabetically, and I decided to start with B…for no reason in particular. I have five left.

Unfortunately it’s missing my girlie Billie because I created her after I started this… ugh.

@hybridlore

Ah. No one “on screen” got shot, just the neighbors in the background, if that makes any sense.

😜

@elishavet-pidyon

🤍🤍

I also thought it was interesting how Elia’s comment “it’s dangerous out there” put all the danger outside, so when it was followed by cozy family time, we felt safe inside. Like the Igby Cottage in WFS. Then ev…

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@grcr

I don’t know who got shot!

@ellette-giselle

lol there was a space in the actual doc, I don’t know why it didn’t transfer over…

This seems a little odd, because 1. it is one of the more standard ways of swearing an oath, and 2. as a soldier he would know this from training and wouldn’t need to be told. I would say something like “swear the oath” etc. Something that tell…

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@grcr

Good scene! I’m still not really sure what happened at the end… but yeah, I was expecting the dad to die too. 😅🥲

I like the siblings too (although their names are confusing, haha.)

@theducktator

Yay! Hope you feel better soon!

@ellette-giselle Haha, your signature! XD

@ellette-giselle

eeeee yay!! 😃 I’m pretty much open to all feedback… yeah.

(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)

LOL

It’s like a family I know, expect they have 15 kids and it’s all “J” names.

😅 I guess great minds think alike lolol

Yeah, it’s not vital. It probably wo…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So the idea you got is already pretty good! But if you need more inspo…

The War of 1812 was interesting, because the United States had just won her independence from Great Britain roughly 30 years ago, and then there they are fighting again. But France/Napoleon Bonaparte also played a role in this by pitting the two against e…[Read more]

@esther-c

Lol! Easton… no… don’t promise all that! 😢 You don’t know what’s going to happen!

Willow and Ruby are so cute. 🤣

@savannah_grace2009 (it’s the scene!!) @hybridlore @ummm, anyone, because I can’t remember who all read Worth All the World XD

Working on the third draft of WAtW currently, and I’m adding in a couple of scenes, including this one, inspired by Sara! 😁

It’s unedited and I’m still not sure where it’s going to fit exactly, so it might feel clunky…[Read more]

@theducktator

My family doesn’t even celebrate Christmas until Christmas Eve.

Is there a reason why you do that?

I’m just curious because I’m going through an advent devotional right now, and the author introduced me to some of the feasts and celebrations leading up to Christmas (like St. Nicholas and St. Lucia), even though my denomination doesn…[Read more]

@theducktator

Aw, I’m sorry! How are you feeling now?

@esther-c I’ll be praying! 🤗