Trailblazer

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@ellette-giselle

I just read your latest section. I was struck by how German their names are!😂 And…you created another Ernst?

Haha! I’ve had others complain that the wolves DIDN’T attack! XD.

Then, I’m extremely glad I told you my input. The animals do not have to attack every single time! *shaking head* So unrealistic.

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Perhaps I’ll share it on here if i ever follow through with anything…

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@ellette-giselle

My thoughts on Section 2:

“We don’t believe in the gods of the Empire,” Julian cut in.

There was a stunned silence.

“We worship the One true God,” Julian explained.

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Ju…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Does this mean we won’t get a new section today? 🥺

A possible option for them is to say they prefer worshipping in private, then they’ll obviously worship God and not the idols. But that is pretty close to a lie already and I don’t see that working more than once or twice. Probably the best thing for them to do is to just tell them.

@ellette-giselle

I think it’s fine. They have to, in this instance, instead of just jumping at it when they don’t need to. Since Elishavet was the one who pointed that out, I would wait to see what she thinks, but I think that it’s fine.

@ellette-giselle

Yes?

@theshadow

Emery, Colin, Jehan, Girard, Philippe, Lorin, Perrin, Nicolas, Richart and Olivier are French.

Some German ones are Alexander, Konrad, Hermann, Heinrich, Emmerich, Berthold, and Christian.

Um, yes!! I would love to see aesthetics!! You don’t even have to ask, girl. XD

@stephie

That’s awesome!! Praise the Lord!

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHH GIRL I LOVE THIS

Weird the forum stopped working…

@freed_and_redeemed Beautiful boards!! I want to meet the characters now 😆

Also, this is random, but I had this memory the other day of when I first joined KP and your signature said you were the Queen of Emojis on KP 😂 Do you remember that?

@freed_and_redeemed

AH, I love the boards!! I think my favorite one is either Acheron’s or Jared’s!! 😀

@freed_and_redeemed

Oooo… I’m quite interested!!

(without the 🌶)

LOLOL I love that! XD XD

@hybridlore

aesthetics are here ⬆️

the forum stopped working for me💀

@theducktator

MC #5: Acheron (Lord)

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MC #4: Jared (Slave)

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MC #3: Alden (Mercenary)