Trailblazer

So essentially the Great One sent him to help Sef by showing what was happening to her in a dream, if that makes sense.

Lilitu’s been having that same dream for a while now, and later it makes him feel like it’s his fault because he could have helped Sef earlier if he’d just taken action sooner.

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Okay…so this scene/chapter comes before the scene where Iver abuses Sef. (I just wrote it last night after looking at the plot and realizing I’d forgotten a major part!!!)

Anyways….

The girl opens her mouth and screams.

Her screams echo off the walls, begging for someone, anyone to hear her.

Her pain is vivid,…

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@esther-c

YES, YES, YESSSSS!

*subscribes*

@whalekeeper @esther-c

Same! I’ve been looking at it a lot recently. I think it’s really good for understanding the main drive and personality of each character, but I don’t understand all of it completely.

Have you guys taken the test? I’m a 5, but I’m not sure what wing I am.

@esther-c I can’t wait!!

@stephie

Also, a triple bunk bed sounds AWESOME.

@stephie

Hi, so nice to meet you! I’m Hybridlore or Hybrid, a homeschooled sophomore, violinist, and science fiction writer.

(Hey, I’m also taller than my mom! But I wasn’t when I was thirteen XD)

Favorite genre?

Favorite books besides the chronicles of Narnia?

Okay, here’s a new one. Do you have a favorite poem, and what is it?

@esther-c @freedomwriter76

They look great! Have y’all tried out Milanote? It’s a pretty cool tool for making character references and moodboards 😊

@stephie

One question of my own: how do I respond to one person individually? And what’s up with tags? I think the two are related but I can’t seem to figure it out.

Ok, so the tags will tell people that you are talking to them, and they will receive a notification. It also shows who exactly you’re talking to—individually or collect…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh, I’ve been looking at that lately. Yeah, it’s kinda hard to understand. XD I’ve just used it for inspiration or help with forming a character’s arc. I basically just read as much as I need to know about a certain type then move on, lol. It’s really interesting tho.

@esther-c

Ooo!! … *subscribes* 😄😃

And for your enjoyment… the mock cover…

(Sorry, had to cover my last name XD)

@stephie

Welcome to Kingdom Pen, Stephanie!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!! I’ve written fantasy, but my current WIP is light dystopian. And, I have lots of story ideas in a myriad of genres.

I am not taller than my mom 😔 But I guess she’s a little above…[Read more]

Tagging some people to say hi:

@rae @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @hybridlore @idk-who-else-to-tag…

@stephie

Hello Stephanie! Greetings from my land of Burne!

I’m -GRCR-! I’m a fiction fantasy-ish writer, an avid artist, a journalist for my fictional newspaper, and a character lover/creator that has over three hundred. I enjoy listening to music and imagining my characters singing the songs.

Welcome to KP! 😁

(Oh my goodness, I’m taller tha…[Read more]

And my personal favorite…

I could make so many moodboards for them, y’all… I love them so much XD

@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @acancello @anyone-else-idk-XD

So I tried a new style of aesthetics… And I really like it so I think I’m gonna make so more. Stay tuned… 👀✨

But for now, these are the first two I tried:

@rae

Oh interesting. I’ll have to look at it…