Trahia the Minstrel

Greetings @unsung !! Offers a handful of virtual chocolates (as my teleportation systems seems to be down).

Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m glad to see you have finally joined, my friend. It only took a few months 😜

See you around!

@kathleenramm

Thank you!

@madelyn Sentient just means they’re like humans, they have souls or minds.

And thanks!

@autumn-rebecca

Oh my goodness! I love the poem! It definitely pulls at me and I really like the rhythm, it flows really well. I’d say definitely publish it to your blog!

I love writing poetry, it gets my heart out more than talking or regular prose ever has. I can paint out the pictures in my mind without worrying about being too descriptive…[Read more]

@madelyn

I can start a pretty good fire myself… just get me a lighter or matches (I haven’t tried rubbing rocks together since I was 8 which I suppose wasn’t even for the purpose of fire. Just to amuse a little me who always had rocks handy and couldn’t sleep fast enough that night and loved the beautiful sparks… Don’t worry nothing caught…[Read more]

@faith-q

He’s on life support right now, but so far nothing has really changed in the past twenty-four hours as far as I know. Thank you so much for your prayer, Faith!

@autumn-rebecca

It’s hard, so thank you so much for your prayer:)

@madelyn

Thank you, I really appreciate it:)

@jenwriter17

Thank you so so much:)

YES.

• A whole Jurassic World fanfiction, themed after a Warriors/Survivors style, was created from a Disney song. Confused yet? It didn’t go far, but it happened.
• I’ve found that the film scores for the Transformers movies would make a nice soundtrack for the stories that my brother and I work on together. I’ve never seen and don’t really care…

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My disappointment at no fire is best summed up with a quote from a favorite TV show:

(a character) Please tell me we’re blowing something up.

(the other character) Sorry [the first one’s name], this is strictly a stealth mission.

(first character) Aaaagh, I hate that word!!

So at least we’re not going on a stealth mission rather than setting…[Read more]

@madelyn

Aww girl! No actual fire! I’m disappointed… 😜😆

Sorry, I won’t be much help in this as I seem to be having the exact same problem! But I’m excited to hear people’s feedback.

@power

Okay I’ll try again. 😆 (It’s been cantankerous and hungry lately it seems lol)

The poem about the baboons sounds funny. I like the balloon one.

Heres one of my favourites of my recent ones. I was minding my own business buisily studying my Physics lesson when this came to mind. It’s doesn’t have any particular meter or rhyme so a bit odd…[Read more]

Wow, that poem sounds like a modern psalm! Like others have said, I think writing it with a specific pattern of syllables might help, but other than that I’m not a big poet, so I can’t really help much. I like it though! It’s awesome!

@emily_d

What’s your book about if I may ask? 👀

You know I’ve never read much of anything in the way of poetry. The only poetry I’ve read is what I’ve been assigned for school in the past couple of years (well other than kids’ nursery rhymes ). So I’m not exactly sure how I picked it up. 😆 Yes, I have published a couple on KP. Here they are:…[Read more]

Very interesting! I don’t think it’s cliche at all, but the fanfics I make with my brother are sometimes cliched on purpose, so I’m not sure if I’d know…

@power

It looks like it ate my reply when I sent it? Did it?

@power

Haha! Sounds like a fun poem baboons bickering in a tree. lol

Oh, I like it!

Here’s another one I wrote. This was a random thought moment after a Physics lesson. It doesn’t exactly rhyme and is a sort of weird pattern. With lots of alliteration, but I like it lol

The Least are Largest

Just small things we are

We are the smallest of…[Read more]

ah looks like it ate my first reply lol

@emily_d What’s your novel about? Is it in the real world or fantasy or both? Are there cool creatures (hints at dragons and such creatures)?

Haha, my family puts everything on pizza. The usual pizza is cheese (several kinds), olives, pineapple, capers, anchovies, peppers, and some sort of meat with the…[Read more]