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BlueJay replied to the topic In a 3rd person story… in the forum Characters 10 years, 2 months ago
@ivy-rose In my story Princess Tess and the Perfect Story my narrator talks to Tess. She refers to Tess’s parent by the King and Queen. But if the narrator was talking to you as you read the book I would probably say something like this. “Then Tess’s parents looked out the window. I probably wouldn’t use their proper names. I don’t know if this in…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic In a 3rd person story… in the forum Characters 10 years, 2 months ago
@ivy-rose In my story Princess Tess and the Perfect Story my narrator talks to Tess. She refers to Tess’s parent by the King and Queen. But if the narrator was talking to you as you read the book I would probably say something like this. “Then Tess’s parents looked out the window. I probably wouldn’t use their proper names. I don’t know if this in…[Read more]
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BlueJay posted an update 10 years, 2 months ago
Rejoice always, pray without ceasing, in everything give thanks; for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus for you. – 1 Thessalonians 16:18
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BlueJay started the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
@daeus (I’ll tag you so you definitely see this) 😛 Please help! I wrote this poem very quickly, which is surprising for me, so I feel like it still needs work, but I’m not 100% sure where. Any suggestions are welcome. 😀
In a land far away,
Where the men were all bad,
They swore by God’s name,
And made Him so mad.He said, “I’ll destroy…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
@reaganramm Thanks. I was still learning the ropes when I posted this. 😀 And once I finally realized how it all work it was too late for me to change it. ;P
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BlueJay replied to the topic How fast do you read? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
So @writefury you’re from Washington? That’s awesome. I should start a topic called “where are you from in the USA?” I wonder if we would get one for each state? 😀 Have you got snow??? 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic How fast do you read? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Yummy! *licks lips* Lovely virtual ice cream. Perfect for a hot day here in Australia. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic In a 3rd person story… in the forum Characters 10 years, 2 months ago
Is the 3rd person talking to the reader or the the MC? @ivy-rose
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BlueJay replied to the topic How fast do you read? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
Well for me, I read fast. Way too fast! I end up thinking I’ve read everything in the book and then I reread it and find a part that I didn’t know was in there. And then I read the book for the third time and find a completely new part that I managed to miss twice. It can get a bit creepy when I reread a book for the tenth (or hundredth) time and…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi all you fellow writers 😉 in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 2 months ago
@cahndida-serkhaman Hi. Welcome to one of the best places in the world. There is a lot of good stuff on this forum and everyone is super helpful. There is never a boring moment here. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic World Building in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 2 months ago
Lovely 😀 😀 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi howdy hey. in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 2 months ago
Hello! @lightningmouse. Welcome to the most bestistest place on the internet. It’s great to have you.
(Sorry @daeus, if I stole that line from you. I just had to say it, cause I sooooo agree with you. 😛 )
So what kind of “stuff/genre” do you enjoy writing @lightning mouse?
You know, we sound very similar. 😛I like Jesus, writing stuff (as l…
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BlueJay replied to the topic World Building in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 2 months ago
What kind of clothes do they wear? @daeus They sound really nice. I kinda feel like I wouldn’t mind meeting one. 😀
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