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    Kate Flournoy
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      Yes, post it, @bluejay! There’s a for short stories here. 🙂

      Kate Flournoy
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        Hm, for some reason my link didn’t work. I’ll try it again. short story forum

        Let’s see if that works. :/

        BlueJay
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          @kate-flournoy – your link worked and the story is posted for all who wish to read it. Please feel free to critique it too. (I looooove criticism) 😛

          #8271
          Ivy Rose
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            @writefury Isn’t it amazing the temp difference in one state? We have some friends that live near Seattle and they tell us that it is quite pleasant there…40 degrees or so. It didn’t get any warmer than 10 degrees here today, but the sun was shining very bright and making the snow look like glitter. It was beautiful, despite the bitter cold that pierced through even the warmest clothes! 🙂

            #8272
            BlueJay
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              @ivyrose – You have snow!?! You are so lucky. We didn’t get any snow last year and I looooooove playing n snow. Can I come an visit you??? 😛

              #8273
              BlueJay
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                Oops. That n should have been ‘in’. Grrrrrrr

                #8275
                Ivy Rose
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                  @bluejay YES!!! We have snow. A lot of snow. Of course you can visit me…why don’t we just trade places for awhile? You get snow and I get warm weather. Deal? 😉

                  Hey, I do that to my ‘in’s’ all the time! My fingers can’t keep up with my brain! 🙂

                  #8276
                  BlueJay
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                    Yeah! Not sure what my family would say but why not? 😉 Oh wait, I have a theatrical production coming up next week and as I’m the lead role, I’d better stay put. *Sad sigh* (Can you post photos on the forum, if yes, you should post some of lovely white fluffy snow.) 😀
                    I do hope, though, to travel to America one day. My brother went to Texas and spent a year at Gospel for Asia (he loved it), but I’d like to go to America and act in a Sight and Sound show. *Dreamy sigh* 🙂

                    #8277
                    Ivy Rose
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                      Aww. 🙁 Well, I’m probably not much of an actress (though I’ve never tried acting before), so I’d better just stay here in the freezing cold, looking out at the pretty snow, (I don’t know how to post photos on here) and reading a good book. 🙂

                      #8279
                      Rosey Mucklestone
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                        @ivy-rose Oh, snow?! Lucky… we pretty much either get clear and cold, or warm and wet. There is no in between. It’s like snow is impossible for this weather. 😛

                        #9493
                        Reagan Ramm
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                          Hey! I just moved this to Novel Ideas because “Start Here” is for new members to introduce themselves. 🙂

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                          Learn Music Production:
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                          BlueJay
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                            @reaganramm Thanks. I was still learning the ropes when I posted this. 😀 And once I finally realized how it all work it was too late for me to change it. ;P
                            Btw: How did you get a profile pic like yours? Did you use Photoshop?

                            #9511
                            Reagan Ramm
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                              No problem! 🙂

                              And I used PicMonkey for my profile pic. It’s really handy.

                              My Music:
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                              Learn Music Production:
                              OrpheusAudioAcademy.com

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