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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@mineralizedwritings (Hi! How are you? Haven’t seen you in forever!) @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @liberty @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @acancello @anyone-else-i-forgot
Hear ye, hear ye! God willing, t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
just showing more of the city or government, to get a feel of how much the world has changed. Something like that, maybe. Maybe you could have Sara or Cole go to a different area,
Okay! I could always try to integrate that into scenes while they’re traveling (to the church meetings, to their jobs).
Ah, okay. That’s fine if your sti…
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Bruh…
Ok we’re gonna try this again.
@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @smiley
Chapter 4
“I haven’t seen Antonio all day… He must not be a sophomore.” Hallie stood on her tiptoes, peering over the heads of the students who roamed the cafeteria.
“You trippin’? I thought you didn’t care that much.” Jennifer pl…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Awwww!!!
But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭
At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh
That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Great! 😁
Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Praying for your relatives!🩵🩵🩵
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Thanks for the article! Unfortunately I’m not very good at fight scenes either, so I won’t be much help. 🙁
More tags: @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @grcr @the_lost-journal @theshadow
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Praying as well! <3
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Praying!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Awesome! Thanks!
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @power
Announcing the winners!!!!
First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.
Shadow:
What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you!! 😊
Thanks!
Ummm… sort of??? I mean, I based it loosely off of my relationship with my older brother—we tend to get along for the most part and rarely, if ever, actually fight. Of course we do goof off, but half of what we goof off about would look so weird in a book. XDD
I know what you mean though, and I d…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @koshka @theshadow
Sorry you three! I got busy on Monday…then the KP web wasn’t working on Tuesday…but I’ll read them today. So, stay tuned!
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 months, 3 weeks ago
CAN YOU REVIEW THE STORIES ALL READY?! sorry
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 1
“Why is it so hot?” Hallie Woodbury tucked a loose strand of ginger hair behind her ear.
“I only have two words that can answer that question: New. Mexico.” Easton straightened and tossed his light brown locks off his forehead with a quick shake of his head.…[Read more]
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