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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Longest chapter yet. Finally, we are starting to get into some Christian themes (turn your heresy radar on). I will try to get Chapter the 15th – The Saviour to you later this week.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator all righty!
@rae @theshadow @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22
Huntress
What was taking them so long? They should’ve found something by now….
With no radio or phone around, I had no way of contacting Sniper or anyone else on the hunting team. I wondered if they’d encountered the wolves we’d seen earlier.
No one had…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae @theshadow @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22
how ’bout we go back to the cabins and have someone come across the inscription?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae oooh great art! I have a sleeping charrie too lol
here’s Sniper snoozing on a lawn chair, but the way he appears in my sci-fi fanfic so he’s got a crocodile-like tail:
I LOVE how I did the posing. I joke that if I jostle the paper too much, he’ll wake up and yell at me for disturbing his nap…..XD
@theshadow I know you’re not…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @keilah-h
Good grief! Y’all are cutting it close!
I set the due-date for the 21st, and it’s the 19th. Should I extend the time? So far I only have one drawing…….
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr (i think I got everyone)
I guess I’ll start the first RP!
Audrey
I closed my eyes tighter as light tried to force them open. My head throbbed, weighing me to the ground. The crisp, cold feel of stone met my touch as I tried to sit up. I slowly opened my eyes, the blood r…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @grcr
I might add someone else later, but for now I’m just doing one.
Ayla (I haven’t given her a last name yet)
Age:Â 15
Species: Human
Appearance: Ayla is 5′ 7”, with pale skin, thick wavy dark brown hair, dark brown eyes, and high cheekbones. She is slender, and typically…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint started the topic Question Regarding Fantasy Books in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Hello everyone. I have a question. In the book I am working on, magic is an evil thing. It twists its users into monsters. My protagonist, Alan, has used some of this magic and become a wizard. He regrets it deeply.
In the chapter I am currently writing, he finds another wizard who, after using magic, became one of The Faithful (What Christians…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@grcr @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @theducktator @esther-c @whalekeeper
yeah I’m keeping Crosshair here because he’s been in here for what, three years now and I greatly enjoy writing him. Feather’s out though, just because I wanna stick with one character for now and might save the slot for a charrie from another WIP or something.
are we…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@grcr @keilah-h @theshadow @theducktator @esther-c
I suggested doing this RP again and then disappeared off the face of the earth🤪 sorry about that y’all
I honestly need to start trying to practice writing characters other than Leon/Riker, buuut I also need to write Leon/Riker 3rd book timeline as well…hmmmmmmm…I may still have to stick with…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you! I’m so glad you like it!
I’ll keep the 23rd in mind.Well thank you so much for the help that you did give me! I’ll miss you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow lol thanks
and LOL that’s too funny. I should write some little snippets of them discovering modern things, that’d be hilarious
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow coooool
I’m imagining what an Ornithiform/Argonite hybrid would look like, and it’s awesome
basically a Quetzalcoatl lol (winged, feathered mythological dragon)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow ahahaha that’s too funny
if it were me, my first thought would’ve been “maybe we’ve been brought here like Aslan brought over the cab driver and his wife in The Magician’s Nephew to be the human rulers of Narnia, and each pair will be the progenitors of a country/species/whatever”
proof that I’m a weird literary choice person…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow thanks!! yesss Soldier is too funny haha
also yeah I love all of them, but I think I’d be either a full Ailurid or a hybrid, either Argonite/Ailurid or Drachenheul/Ailurid. what would be your other half? Ornithiform/what else?
I suppose we’ll talk when you get back! I’ll probably have added quite a bit to the story by then 😉
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow
Tis time for the next chapter. Thank you for your patience.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
New scene!
Asher and Eric were only the first of many war orphans who found shelter in the orphanage. On the second day of the two brother’s arrival, a girl came by saying her mother had felt led to give them some children’s clothing and she hoped Sabina could find someone who needed them. Aft…
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @grcr @theducktator
M’kay! I’ve decided on another character duo! (Actually three characters, but I’m only gonna write from the POV of two of them) I need practice writing these guys since I don’t normally do first person, but their novel is going to be completely in first!
So! Without further ado….…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
new section!!!
The days passed, and the people of Ardenta waited in eager anticipation for the Sabbath. They longed to see each other, to hear from Aaron, and to be united in worship once again. At last, the week’s end came.
Early in the morning, before the sun or soldiers were up, the people w…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
Ok, all y’all who have stuck with me through all of this, I have a question.
Is anyone willing to help me write a blurb? I keep trying and nothing sounds right? Anyone have ideas or examples?
Also, I’ll try to get another section tomorrow. I’m a little distracted with the publishing process of…[Read more]
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