TheShadow

@theshadow

Instead of giving you a direct answer, I am going to give you a few things to think through from both sides of the argument.

I don’t believe that just because something has been invented by a Godless person does not mean it is wrong. Consider this: If we take a look at the book of Genesis, it was Jubal who invented instruments.…[Read more]

@theshadow

This sounds like something my OCD brain would get stuck on as well. I don’t think music is evil just for being a certain type of music, but everyone will always have different opinions about this and if it is OCD, talking about it and trying to come up with a logical answer sounds good, but it’s not going to help.

It’s up to you if yo…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.

Chapter 27

Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]

Tagging as many people as I can think of.

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @rae @theducktator @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @theshadow @janellebelovedpig @stephie @ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @the_lost-journal @felicity…[Read more]

@theshadow

This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve into the despair a bit more, but other than that everything is good.

Thank you!
And…[Read more]

@theshadow @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @theducktator @keilah-h

New chapters!! There’s a bundle of them, but yes, this is the end. 🥹

Let me know when you’ve finished, and I’ll try to put together some questions about the larger arc of the book.

Thank you guys so much for reading! Your encouragement and comments have been…[Read more]

@theshadow

Hello! So nice to meet you, and thanks!

It’s been great, definitely better this last school year. I feel like I’m just getting the hang of things and now it’s ending!

I would love that. I am going to start editing it soon, but I’ve been so busy.

@theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper

New chapters!

@theshadow lol

He had the one. Now he doesn’t. It’s a bone of contention among the team as to how the capability of thought is distributed.

Perhaps when the Administrator calls out “The enemy has stolen our intelligence,” she means it in more ways than one.

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 24

Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.

How can anything go b…[Read more]

@theshadow

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.

Thank you so much!!

A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…

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@theshadow

Lol, five might be a little generous XD

HAHAHA

one of them was likely stolen from Scout.

@theshadow

Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))

I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!

@hybridlore

Oh, thanks! I do have some people already signed up for feedback, but I won’t say no to more.

@theshadow

Access granted. There’s nothing there quite yet, but I’ll tag you when I get something posted.

@jonas

I’ll try to check it out! It sounds cool, but I don’t know if I’m ready to sign up for reading another project right now. I’m sure there are some people on here who would, though!

Throwing out some tags…

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @theshadow

New chapters!

@theshadow

Hey! I’m doing pretty good, how are you?

No worries, I know the end of the school year is chaotic. 😂 I’ll add you to the new doc!

Thanks! Glad you like him. 😅 He’s one of my favorites too.

@theshadow thanks lol

they’re hilarious together ngl. also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol

@theshadow

I’ll try to get to it!

@rae @theshadow you two are probably the only ones who will find this funny

So I’m currently writing a version of the story I shared with you guys, but from Sniper’s perspective; it’ll start from shortly before he joined the team and continue throughout everything. I decided to include an intro similar to the one Huntress has in her version of…[Read more]