TheShadow

@theshadow

CAN YOU REVIEW THE STORIES ALL READY?! sorry

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 1

“Why is it so hot?” Hallie Woodbury tucked a loose strand of ginger hair behind her ear.

“I only have two words that can answer that question: New. Mexico.” Easton straightened and tossed his light brown locks off his forehead with a quick shake of his head.…[Read more]

@theshadow thank you!!! I just threw him together quickly, not tryna make a masterpiece.

@theshadow

Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and grammarly, and I just write and write and don’t look back until the whole thing is on paper. Beginning to end. Then you can go back and start editing and fine-lining and rewriting. Give yourself a foundation to build off of, o…[Read more]

Alrighty, I read over the next two chapters and decided to post them both today, but after this, you can expect to get only one a week… unfortunately, I only have six more chapters after this. 🙁 I guess that means I need to write more haha.

Without further ado, here’s the link! (It’s the same one as last time &#x1f…[Read more]

@theshadow

Ah. I thought it might be the first draft.

Can I give you some advice?

From what I can tell about the way you write, you seem to have trouble getting through your progects. My advice to you is common for first drafts. Don’t worry about rewriting anything. Just power through, and keep writing without looking back. There is going to be…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks!!! ☺️

@smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Thank you ladies! Sure thing!!

@theducktator

Wait really?? Oh I didn’t even notice! Maybe I’ll have to read the book now 😝

@anybody who wants to see but @theshadow specifically

here’s a quick sketch I did of Old Hunter’s face!

@theshadow

Whenever I’m alone and can’t find anyone in the house I assume they’ve been Thanos snapped or something lol.

exactlyyyyy

@theshadow

The rewrite of the chapter looks good.

Question of you. What draft number is this?

@theshadow

way better!! I love how the mom and dad are actually noticing their kids and are not just obvious adults who need the teens to “enlighten” them.

@whalekeeper

Yes!!! @koshka @elishavet-elroi @theshadow and I were discussing this on one of the video calls a few weeks ago, and we made a list of possible questions.

@theshadow

*red-faced with embarrassment* Just forget what I said above.

@theshadow

Oops! Sorry, I didn’t mean to tag you in the above one. Are you ready to submit your story?

@savannah_grace2009 @koshka @theshadow

Thank you!!! I will read over them today…and Lord willing, post my feedback tomorrow.

@raxforge

Okay! Thanks for letting me know!

@theshadow 😆

@theshadow yes! I definitely will!

@theshadow

It looks so much better! I love that we got to see their family now. I feel like I know the characters so much better already.