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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 hour, 27 minutes ago
@theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @savannah-grace2009
Chapter 11! I’m not totally decided if I’ll completely reduce down to one a week in the future, so you may get a few surprise double chapters, but this week there’s only one.
Also, TCoH has become my longest project at just over 33k words and about 100 W…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 17 hours, 10 minutes ago
@theshadow it still took me a while to get it right, but considering I was only doing a headshot (pun intended) it was done quickly since I didn’t have to worry about anything under his neck.
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days ago
@mineralizedwritings (Hi! How are you? Haven’t seen you in forever!) @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @liberty @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @acancello @anyone-else-i-forgot
Hear ye, hear ye! God willing, t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 1 hour ago
just showing more of the city or government, to get a feel of how much the world has changed. Something like that, maybe. Maybe you could have Sara or Cole go to a different area,
Okay! I could always try to integrate that into scenes while they’re traveling (to the church meetings, to their jobs).
Ah, okay. That’s fine if your sti…
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 1 hour ago
Bruh…
Ok we’re gonna try this again.
@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @smiley
Chapter 4
“I haven’t seen Antonio all day… He must not be a sophomore.” Hallie stood on her tiptoes, peering over the heads of the students who roamed the cafeteria.
“You trippin’? I thought you didn’t care that much.” Jennifer pl…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 21 hours ago
Awwww!!!
But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭
At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh
That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 18 hours ago
Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 19 hours ago
Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 19 hours ago
Great! 😁
Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 20 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 13 hours ago
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 days, 16 hours ago
Praying for your relatives!🩵🩵🩵
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 16 hours ago
Thanks for the article! Unfortunately I’m not very good at fight scenes either, so I won’t be much help. 🙁
More tags: @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @grcr @the_lost-journal @theshadow
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 days, 17 hours ago
Praying as well! <3
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 days, 18 hours ago
Praying!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 18 hours ago
Awesome! Thanks!
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 18 hours ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 19 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @power
Announcing the winners!!!!
First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.
Shadow:
What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 20 hours ago
Thank you!! 😊
Thanks!
Ummm… sort of??? I mean, I based it loosely off of my relationship with my older brother—we tend to get along for the most part and rarely, if ever, actually fight. Of course we do goof off, but half of what we goof off about would look so weird in a book. XDD
I know what you mean though, and I d…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 2 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 @koshka @theshadow
Sorry you three! I got busy on Monday…then the KP web wasn’t working on Tuesday…but I’ll read them today. So, stay tuned!
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