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@whalekeeper

Lois

“I’d like that,” he said, with a slight smile in his eyes. He could use some friends, and he liked Moth, even if he was a bit strange.

Lois looked down at his plate after filling it, and suddenly realized he wasn’t hungry. The food stayed untouched. He glanced back at his friend.

“If you don’t mind me asking, what is that pa…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Dante

Dante was silent for a moment. Now that he thought about it, he really was running low on safe places he could stay.

“I guess… I could hide in a corner of that basement for a few more days. Try to sleep this off.”

@whalekeeper Awwwww so cute he looks like a gummy candy 💕 Have you gotten to hold it?

@savannah_grace2009

cross my heart, I knew about this guy before reading those books! lol

Yes, it’s really wacky. I completely skipped the second book, but even then it was bad.

@ellette-giselle

OMC that’s crazy because when I read your post I thought it was an example from the Cloak of Light books XDXD

and yes it’s crazy…I agree they’re cool but holy moly the theology  *cries*

@theducktator

that’s so real 😭😭😭😭

@esther-c

Oh my word girl I am so sorry!!!

Even though nothing’s been officially diagnosed yet, I’m sure it’s hard :/

I’ll be praying that God gives you all peace, and that the results come back SUPER QUICK (because waiting is so hard!! especially with something like this) and I will be praying that it’s NOT cancer or anything serious like…[Read more]

@loopylin

whoops! I saw this by accident! KP didn’t notify me. 😑

Rory

He blinked. Shrugged. Life was confusing. Why did people say things they didn’t mean? He moved behind the chair on wheels and grabbed the handles, carefully, he began to push it down the sidewalk. “Where are we going?”

@theducktator

Ugh, being sick is the worst. Everyone in my family likes to get sick one at a time so that by the time the last person is getting better the first person has moved on to something new…. 😑

Praying.

@whalekeeper

Haha! Love the last one!

@linus-smallprint

Family friend, but yes. Dad knew him while he was in the military.

@whalekeeper

Have fun!

(When you return, I will pelt you with snowballs so you will have to share your writing…I didn’t use many last year…)

@koshka

That had better be utter sarcasm, XD

@koshka

Oh, okay then.

Those books are cool, but they also have a lot of wacky things theology-wise.

@koshka

I KNOW! When I was reading that I was like, “No way! This is what happened to –––” Except I don’t think Drew Carter’s dad died in Dessert Storm. And was he Special Forces?

@esther-c

Glad it was helpful. I have a possible idea for something that you could try for option three.

We knew a kid who was trying to go straight. His dad was Special Forces and died in Dessert Storm. His dad’s best friend was kind of a mentor to him tho and was trying to fill in as a father figure. None of them were Christian’s at this…[Read more]

@esther-c

Could you maybe say what specifically she’s doing? I might be able to help more with specifics, but if you want to avoid spoilers, that’s alright.

Every sin has an effect on the person sinning and the people around them, whether visible or not. So even if she’s enjoying herself, you can show how it’s eating away at other parts of her…[Read more]

@esther-c

Hi Esther. I actually had something similar to deal with in one of my books as well. Here are the two things I would say to keep in mind that will most likely make the difference.

1. There can be a time where the MC believes a lie as long as it is shown to be a lie by the end of the book. (i.e. There are some rough consequences…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

That’s something I’ve never heard before XD

I was just chatting with the YouTuber guy…he doesn’t know how it ends yet, obviously, but from what he just told me, he’s gonna love it.

Yes, I somehow found myself with a group of people who I think represents a huge variety.

I’m not deserving of the alpha-reader title. 😅

I’m still crown…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nice. How long do you think it’ll take to get their feedback and work through it? (Your guess, of course 🙂)

I’m assuming by February. Which could either be a good guess or will have senior authors shaking their heads. The way I figure is that they probably won’t go through it fast at first due to Christmas and New Year’s, and school s…[Read more]