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@thearcaneaxiom

I like your idea of that the magic words are evil because of the purpose given by the Pythonos. So I might use that? I’m still not sure, haha!

Names of people:

Ottoline, Marcurious, Sparrow, Rishona, Berko, Sef, Lilitu, Azazel, Indie, Jordan (I need a new name for him, an evil one, so if you could help that would be great!),…[Read more]

@trailblazer

“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most

practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…

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@esther-c

I’m so excited, lol!

@grcr

Who wants to start? I’ve never done this before, so anyone more experienced want to start?

@thearcaneaxiom

what do you mean by a list of names and consonants?

Do you mean names of characters?

@grcr

Thank you! Yes, I do like the name and it seemed to fit her character! That’s funny that you have a sister named Neveah! haha

@thearcaneaxiom

Interesting, so in that case, what would have allowed a universal language to come about? A grand unification? Maybe just a tongue similar to what is happing with English that simply became more…

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@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

XD my brain must be tired because instead of putting Light’s name I put @Ezrian, like who tries to tag their own charrie 😂🤪

EZRIAN

Eyebrows raised, Ezrian blinked down at the youth who had just fallen face forward onto the floor and then promptly introduced himself. Though he did look foreign…maybe falling…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6

Jack 

Just as Tyler spoke, the closet door swung open into the hall again.

Jack stepped out, still talking to Cody over his shoulder. “You can’t just slam the door in someone’s face. Come on out ‘an introduce yerself.”

He turned to the two out in the hall and gave them both a respectful nod. “Sorry for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Seriously, though, your writing style is my favorite. I can’t wait to read something you publish.

@whalekeeper

This might just be me being a grammar perfectionist, and you haven’t done it in a while, but I have noticed a couple times you have written sentences like this:

“He stopped at the door, listened.”

I’ve seen actual published authors do this too, so it’s probably not a big deal, but when I see it, it distracts me from the story bec…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude, I love your writing style so much though! I’m trying to find something in your role plays, but I might be better at critiquing a snippet (sorry you’re busy with school! If you can’t find one, that’s alright.). I’ll keep looking, though.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thanks! 😊

I wonder why I do it though?

Do you have any common tropes like that?

@grcr

That would be fun!

@thearcaneaxiom

Great! What language would it be? Would you want a universal Andromedan tongue, or something for each of the groups, or even something else entirely?

Just a universal Andromedan language and some magic words.

@keilah-h

Uh like a fourth of them are. I have a lot of characters XD

@keilah-h

Ok, well I can’t make him yell at them for something as little as that lol

Mr. Gregory 

Gregory rounded a corner and stopped suddenly in front of several (how many of them are there?) lizard-like students. One spun around and bared his teeth, but stopped when Mr Gregory wasn’t who he expected.

Who was he expecting, then?

“Sorry, sir…[Read more]

If you guys actually do end up doing a masquerade ball, I’d love to join later. That is, if there aren’t too many people already.

@whalekeeper @euodia-vision

Felicity 

“Decided to test the system?”

She shrugged. “School’s not really my thing.”

Lois looked at her disapprovingly. “You’ve never even been to school before.”

Felicity grinned at him and then quickly changed the subject.

“Anyway, like I was trying to ask earlier, what worlds are you guys from?”

She open…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh I did just realize that I have this one character dynamic that I always fall into. It’s where one character is the super chaotic one and constantly wants to go do things and they have a friend/sibling/coworker/whatever who is always really chill and tired, maybe a bit grumpy. The chaotic character is always dragging around the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

XD thanks

Oh, cool! What a nice coincidink. I never specified the color, so they can be white if u want.