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@sarafini

OH MY GOSH I LOVE ADVENTURES IN ODYSSEY!!!!

but i probably won’t join….because I would rather just rant about Odyssey in general. So should I make a post thread where we can just “argue” about conspiracy theories, the way things “should have gone” (we’d be kind while arguing, of course, haha) or just talk about all things Odyssey?

@mineralizedwritings

It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)

It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.

Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds “cruel” to put my characters so much for the sake of an unhealthy…[Read more]

@power @hybridlore

Great advice!

@mineralizedwritings

Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)

@spinner4him

Actually, yes. I have been stepped on before six times, by six different horse on the same foot. I work at a stable that has 39 +/- horses, so it’s bound to happen.

It’s not a brand, it’s type of cheese and my personal favorite, try it sometimes It’s really good with celery or rice cakes.

Glad to here you like kp, hope to see you…[Read more]

Hey, if you want to see my writing WIP, I started a topic called “Criticism on a revision draft” My first two chapters are on there.

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @jonas @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

If I just tagged you and you aren’t interested, feel free to go away.

So…If you’re still around, and haven’t read the first chapter, look up. If you’re still around and you have read the first chapter, look down.

CHAPTER 2-…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I do know how to tag people, but who would be interested? I do have two friends, but at the time I posted that, they we nonexistent. Should I just tag people I know?

I like your idea of adding Nahim in, it’s probably the only advice I’ve gotten about this chapter that doesn’t ruin my purpose at all.

Actually, funny you should…[Read more]

I just have to show you this…

My Character:

Nahim (nay-him) Alfred Nayhelm

gender: Masculine

Eye color: Red

Hair color: black

Skin Shade: pale brown or little a little b little a little b (abab) to anyone who understands that.

Voice: It has been described as “Young, too young” and “the voice of a thirteen-year-old”

Age in my WIP: 19-21

Height: about 6 feet.

People/…[Read more]

Hi! I’m RAE or you can call me Ru or Ruee

I’m a blue-eyed girl who’s insane about horses, passionate about writing, loves her God, plays the piano, dabbles in poetry and machine embroidery, and reaches for the sky…But hasn’t reached it yet. I’m a homeschooler with a big imagination at the age of fourteen. Good to meet you. **Hand shake**…[Read more]

@jonas

That’s a great idea! The problem is, on my google account I have, it’s my school account and the docs I make can’t be shared with anyone else that has a non school account. I will, however now post the link to my “reedsy” account, (it’s like google docs, but no one can edit or comment.

h ttps://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ Copy and paste…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

@sarafini

I forgot to mention that most of the things that you’ll find wrong with this thread have already been mentioned by others and have been either fixed or the chapters deleted and replaced.

I deleted the paragraphs about the races, and fixed multiple other problems. Maybe I need to make a new thread for the new and improved WIP, lol.

@mineralizedwritings

Love the pic! How do you get that detailing in the hair!!!? I’ve been trying to do that for like years!

@highscribeofaetherium

Thanks, it’s my most recent watercolor of my MC, Nahim (pronounce nay-him never nah-him)

@jonas

**indebted-to-you smile of joy**