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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I know….I think Wyoh’s going too far…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@whoever-made-up-Wyoh
your ghost is eating my ideas
@savannah_grace2009 Another victim of our Wyoh!
Don’t worry, you’re not alone, she’s been eating my notifs before I see them, eating Freedom’s posts and cursing Sara to spell tags wrong! 😆
She’s been very busy lately.
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@scoufinch180
I’m finally replying.
How did Nahim get here after fainting in the middle of a hostile environment?]
That is revealed later on in the book. While Nahim thought that it was impossible, someone did come into the grasslandsxand found him. Not Mandin though.
I’m guessing the stone (may I suggest the Opal, heart, or Eye of the…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, I just couldn’t remember if they were courting or not. It’s been a while since I’ve read this XD
I kinda want Chester to change his mind and court Libbie, but it would also really hurt Etta and would cause more drama so I don’t at the same time. lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Wait, so is Etta and Chester dating? I can’t remember XD
And I love it!!! It’s so perfect <333
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Nar
“Nar? I would love to go to the dance with you.” Nar burst in another smile, but before she could answer, he held a finger to his mouth. “But we don’t know each other too well. So I’d also love to buy you some treats before we ride the bus back, and hang out. So you can decide. Is that okay?”
“Yeh! I’d love too! Ih cum len fl…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks for understanding!! I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD but I’m happy that I got an answer from God and that makes me feel a lot more confident.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Idk why but I just feel bad for Etta XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Awww poor Etta!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@acancello @grcr @hybridlore @esther-c
I’ve been praying about this today…and I just got a strong sense that God wants me to keep the beginning like I had it…like the second link.
I just feel a lot better about the way I had it before. I’m not sure why…I just get anxiety every time I think about starting it that way, and feel immediate…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
WHY DO I KEEP SPELLING YOUR TAG WRONG?!?!?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@traiblazer
Well hurry up and post/write it so I can read it!!!!!!!! XD NOW I’M CURIOUS!!!!! lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c Yeah, Liv has blue eyes. She also has blue skin and hair XD
Livia
She heard Fynn say “Aww”, and it was clear who he was talking about. Liv wanted to smack him upside the head.
“He is so annoying,” she rolled her eyes.
“Tell me about it,” Lukas muttered under his breath.
Liv’s stomach came alive with butterflies as they danced…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂
you’re good!!! You can just read it over on these links. I posted earlier in this thread, or I can send you the Google docs link so you can comment and edit. I can’t send the docs link now because I’m…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Ack, I keep procrastinating doing a Lois/Felicity rp. How do you guys do thissss
Ok, hold on I’m working on it.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yes I’m an aunt! It’s the best! And my parents are grandparents O_0
I hadn’t heard Nicknames before you mentioned it, but now it’s one of my favorites. <3 I also love Fuzzybrain and Run the World. And my favorite TOP song is Tear in My Heart.
K-pop seems like it’s getting more popular lately. I kinda want to check it out.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lol! What do you think I am?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Nar
“I don’t live with my birth family, I lived with a clan of crazy people until I was fourteen, and escaped with my adopted brother, who is one of said crazy people. Now I fend for myself, in the cold, dark world of darkness.” Hugo laughed. “I have to look scary. That’s actually my job.” Nar blew a strand of hair from over her…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
That is very helpful, thank you.
My latest idea for Returns has a similar theme as Nahim’s stories, where Alpha must forgive and reconcile with his father, or Grathmere will die. Kinda like if Luke was the one with hatred and trying to kill Vader, but Vader is still the bad guy. And then Luke forgives him and a happy ending w…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
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