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@esther-c

Idk…I just feel like that way has much better writing and is just more emotional XD

if I’m being completely honest here… sometimes hooks are overrated…. 👀😂

lol!

@trailblazer

Aww that was so sweet I love it!!

@esther-c

I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.
BUT
I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our laps off…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nar

“Yeah, I get that. I mean, you don’t get punished for messing it up, you’re just corrected. If you’re born Realn it’s as natural as walking, and putting your left hand over your heart just feels like a crime. If you’re not…it seems like a bunch of silly rules. Why not use the left hand, your right might be busy?” Nora sto…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, from Nahim’s right elbow down is robotic. I might make it the entire arm.

@keilah-h Lol that’s awesome! It’s always so satisfying when you draw decent hands

@whalekeeper

HAHAHAHA

I snorted so hard when I saw that oh my gosh 😆

*Ahem* Well, in that case:

But hey, at least it’s not like the family tree I created for my warrior cats OC’s…that one was top notch crazy.

XD oh my gosh warrior cats… those books traumatized me

@keilah-h

Lol, I don’t smoke. XD  But I didn’t research it either. I just kinda know? From like observation and watching movies probably

@keilah-h

Family dynamics are crazy….

Ikr. I have some cousins who are technically my mom’s cousins, but they are younger than me because they were adopted, despite being a generation above me.

@freedomwriter76

Hey, I really liked that scene! Makes me want to read more about both Fin and Erich. <3

There is a difference between a cigar and a cigarette, though. Cigarettes are the little paper rolls that come in packets. Cigars are much bigger, more expensive, and take much longer to smoke.

@grcr

I’ve literally been so excited all week XXD sometimes I’ll see it and think I missed it, and freak out, then be like, oh wait, we still have a day left lol

@smiley @freedomwriter76 @grcr

Thank you! I used a reference

@rae Thanks for the tips! I don’t think I have a scanner printer so I might just outline and color it digitally.

@whalekeeper

nooo they’re MY children

@vinagirl

Thank you so much <333 It makes me so happy when people compliment my writing, especially when I’ve been really insecure about it and worrying that it’s not  good and I should just quit XD

And yeah, I love that scene too 🙂 thanks for reading!!

@thearcaneaxiom

We posted the times earlier in this thread if you don’t know what time.

@grcr

I put it on my calendar so I wouldn’t forget XD

Are you guys excited to break the record tomorrow???

Or maybe #Albie?

@trailblazer

I LOVE THIS….IF LIBBIE DOESN’T MARRY ALBERT…I’M GONNA CRY….

#LALBERT

XD

you’re welcome

@rae

Oh my gosh Nae is so cute <333 XD