TheShadow

@whalekeeper Oh ok does this work? https://www.canva.com/design/DAF_tHaJtT8/aNqWK1mKACTd201McURA4Q/view?utm_content=DAF_tHaJtT8&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=editor
sorry I never use canva and I have the computer skills of a grandmother

Oh hey my insults finally worked.

@keilah-h yeah it’s weird

Rude, Wyoh. Just rude.

I think it worked? It’s a drawing of Lois @anyonewhocaresimtoonervoustoactuallytagpeoplern

Ok so I have no idea what I’m doing with this, but I’m going to try to share a drawing with a link? https://www.canva.com/design/DAF_sqkLfFg/-se1nV_WKnhIbQAZlNI_FQ/edit?utm_content=DAF_sqkLfFg&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

@freed_and_redeemed

hehe I’m teasing. My brother and I like telling each other “Don’t die. It’s bad for your health.” whenever we’re sick or accidentally trip and fall or something XD

@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper Y’all need to stop being sick. It’s bad for your health.

@esther-c

Ah, I love them bothhh 😂😍

And I love Froy as Ev’s refrence

@esther-c

No problem!

And I was wondering what your charries look like? You don’t have to give me a description rn but eventually that would help 😂

@rae @keilah-h @beth-torres @jonas

Kay, just gonna have something random happen with the siege or something.

NAZYRA

She backed away from the stream, shuddering. Nazyra looked back at the rest of her companions, opening her mouth to say something when a piercing sound erupted in the distance. What was that? Had it been outside the city, or…[Read more]

@everyone

Okay, idea. What if the villains are already in the castle, and meet the groups that way to start working with them?

And for everyone who wanted to add a villain but was worried about their characters recognizing them. What if whoever ‘summons’ the villains simply gives them a disguise or magically cloaks their identity?

@power

*Convulses into spasms then collapsed to the ground* 😫😫😫

NOOOOOOO!!!! HAVE MERCY ON YOUR POOR READERS!!!! 😭😭😭

IT’S SO DRAMATIC!!! 😤😤😤

Oh, I am so sorry 😂. May I ask, is it that specific romance suggestion, or the very idea of the word itself?

@jonas

Yeah I agree! I could maybe do one this morning, but I’ll be pretty today and tomorrow

We’ll see!

@esther-c

I totally forgot to do descriptions!! 😅

Welp,

Serin

I have an old pic of Serin, but it won’t show.

Looks- she’s Pelgarkine, which means light blue skin, taller than the average human. And shiny aquamarine hair. She wears fitted and sleek metal armor that glints different colors of silver, green, and blue. She’s carrying a simple…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oooh, I love romantic side plots XD

XD Sammmeeee, I’m a total sucker

You could also toss in some conflict and have the guy meet her with bad intentions, like to figure out how to make Vital or steal it, etc. But then he ends up liking her. I feel like that trope is kinda overused, but if it’s done well, it doesn’t bother me.

I like Loo…

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@anyone

Okay I had one idea that is kinda random but it’s there.

He could be this Gladiator who fights for entertainment, who looks all fierce in the ring, but then in reality is this perfect gentleman and all sweet and always apologizes to his opponents after he fights them. And he and the MC meet before one of his matches and then she’s like”…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks! No that’s great!

He could possibly be from outside the city, but it would be difficult

But I definitely like the idea of him not knowing or caring about her making Vital! And it could be something she worry’s about or has dealt with in the past. A ‘you only care about the money’ situation.

@princesachronicle22

Ok, well I’m definitely no expert on this, but I will try to help.

I think he should probably be someone from outside the city, because that would then make her curious and maybe ask him things about what it’s like outside. Also, I think it would be important that he either doesn’t know or doesn’t care that Nikari  can ma…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

Oooohhh love it Ry!!

I haven’t read through the whole thing yet but I will come back later, because I wanna know more!

(actually we’ve spent more time on the characters and world than the actual writing).

Think you’ve just summed up the entirety of an aspiring author’s process  😂. But figuring that stuff out befo…[Read more]