TheShadow

Someone make a meme. Preferably with Buck Wild and a dragon in it…

@keilah-h XDXD

@keilah-h

Hunter and Omega are my favs. Wrecker is funny, Crosshair is a tragedy, and Tech is great. Plus Echo’s back story *cries*

And then when I think of Echo, I think of Heavy, and then when I think of Heavy, I think of 99, and then I think of Fives becoming an arc trooper, then I think about Fives and Tup, and then I have a good long cry…[Read more]

He’s only twenty and he walks with a cane. Man, what do I do to my charries?! Nahim has an arm missing, so does Silvanis. Glace got banished for something he didn’t do. Chase is…well you know (oh, and he got a pet goat btw). Alpha is being torn apart on the inside. Terry Darr lost his kingdom. And the list goes on…

I think I’m gonna add Igua Dyke Cloak.

Igua is average height by our world standards. Has green eyes and slightly curly brown hair. Burn scars on the left side of his face. Walks with a limp and cane. Oh, he literally has the imprint of hand burned into his left shoulder (tangle with a fire elf, get burned).

• Hates butter knives
• Has an AI…

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@highscribeofaetherium

WHYYYYY

UGHHH

I forgot what I was gonna say

I know! First person books can either be super good or just…cringe..

@everyone

Why do you guys hate first person so much?????

It’s just funny because like all my writing friends in real life absolutely LOVE first person, and then on KP everyone seems to strongly dislike it!

I personally LOVE first person books with multiple pov’s….idk…they are just so fun!

Ok I give up. Wyoh, you’re a jerk

@everyone

The only rule about charrie amount limit is that you have to be able to keep track of them all. I’d that’s none or ten, doesn’t matter.

@whalekeeper

Yes, to answer your question. Either plan out a section of the adventure, or say the color of grass and sky, then throw a hydra at them or whatever other wacky thing you want.

Like I said, chaotic idea, but fun.

2ax²z

@whalekeeper

I did not forget, I was thinking.

Do you think the issue is his personality? Because from what you’ve said, his personality is uneven/confusing for you. Being created in a lab might explain some random urges, but what is the purpose of those random urges in the story? After all, you are the author, and every decision you make is p…

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@rae I don’t think I can handle another rp at the moment, but this sounds fun and I might join later on

Wyoh, I can’t think of a good insult rn, but stop

@esther-c First person for some reason really bothers me. There are some books like Percy Jackson and the Penderwicks that I’ve enjoyed despite being in first person, but it still really pulls me out of the story. It makes me wonder why the mc is talking to me or if the book is like the mc’s perso…[Read more]

@esther-c First person for some reason really bothers me. There are some books like Percy Jackson and the Penderwicks that I’ve enjoyed despite being in first person, but it still really pulls me out of the story. It makes me wonder why the mc is talking to me or if the book is like the mc’s personal diary? Are they the kind of person to write dow…[Read more]

@esther-c

I would say, just use a lot of Abbie Emmons’ advice (I’m sure you’re probably doing that already though XD) and make everything that happens build the internal conflict more.

And about first person…obviously don’t do it if you don’t want to, but I think first person helps bring out the character’s voices a lot more. While the actual…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium Sorry, spelled your tag wrong

@loopylin

When Dante returns, he will most likely find Jr in the room trying to figure out how to read the note. Jr has a vast knowledge of languages, but this language he can only speak and understand, reading is basically impossible for him (he probably recognizes words here and there, but otherwise nothing)

I feel like Sebzter Gangster is…[Read more]

1. Oh and I don’t think him walking slowly and carefully quite fits? It totally could work and you can ignore me here, but typically you’re in either fight, flight, or freeze mode during a panic attack. You’re not thinking logically, you’re just acting on fear. Obviously he’s not going to fight, so I think it would make more sense if he was eithe…[Read more]