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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 weeks, 6 days ago
I like this a lot!! This section is good. I was trying to remember what happened beforehand. So far the stories have flowed, even though they are individual stories. This one seems a little out of place regarding the last one.
otherwise, i like this!!
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Crazy Cat Lady replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @whalekeeper @keilah-h
Sorry for not posting in eight days. I hit Writer’s Block while trying to edit the next story to go on here and writing the next one 🙁
I’m not sure how long until I can post the full thing, but until then, I’m gonna post a snippet of the next…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
awesome! Glad I could be of help.
I think we’re all a little defensive of our stuff. 😂
I remember when you kept criticizing Aaron I was crushed because he’s a lot like me and I felt like you were criticizing me and saying I was a cardboard cutout. It took a few weeks for me to separate myself from him and see your cri…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Thanks for getting back! I will try to make it slower! 😁
and I will only share the other projects!
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
That is just one of the 6 stories in it (it is the shortest one) Other stories in A Cellar’s tales are about a lot of different things, here are some of the names:
Security logs
Hallucinations
Friendly face
and two other
But I heard it does connect to the other stories. So the questions will be answered! But in some of the other st…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
I really like this chapter! Everything critical I was going to say @hybridlore already covered.
I really enjoy these characters. I like how Jack sticks up for his sister, and I’m eager to find out what happens and where Elina got her scar!
make sure to keep tagging me because I’m really enjoying this.
and those girls giving her a h…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Should I tag some people!? I guess so. ^^^^^^
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas
hello, hybrid lore told me to tag people if I wanted them to give feedback over my stuff, so if you guys wouldn’t mind, could you judge my story? Thanks! 😅
(it is…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 6 days ago
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
OMG!!!!
Richarded
I did not mean that! I MEANT TO PUT RICHARD!!!!!
NOT THE OTHER THING
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
but I’m homeschooled, and therefore kind of clueless
As are 95% of the people in the roleplay, lol. You’d fit right in :]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 weeks ago
thx
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
I started scrolling through old topics and feeling all nostalgic. Anyone remember the sleepover rp? And I think we had a movie theater rp at some point too
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
@theducktator You could also probably join the character castle, one of the oldest still active role plays on here. I don’t think it’s completely dead yet. Just gotta tag some people.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
I don’t know who’s in charge of the others… I’m sure whalekeeper would know.
Most roleplays don’t have one person in charge usually. That’s something that’s unique to the adventure rp. We usually just agree to some basic rules and then kinda do whatever
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
@theducktator There’s the fantasy school role play that’s still active, though people seem to be busy right now so it’s not moving very much. We just started a new day so your characters could easily join and go to whatever kind of class you want them to take.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 weeks ago
i really love the direction.
character development seems good and solid. But it’s hard to know that from just reading an outline.
again, it all depends on how you play it, but I was feeling Eustace and dragon change more than Kalmar and wolf. (Even though it is a wolf) I think you’re fine and should go for it. I can let you…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
I like this much better. I feel more comfortable, but it also plays into the allegory style better. (At least in my opinion)
my only suggestion (besides fine combing because there were a few typos) is old be this paragraph.
I do not know what Alan thought as he used the spell, so instead of telling you that, let’s say he in…
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Potato reporter changed their profile picture 4 weeks ago
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 weeks ago
Guys! I tried digital art again, and I think it came out even better 😆😆😆 please tell me if it is good!!!! (I tried really hard🥲 I think it is good enough)
Ignore the bad handwriting
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