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@hybridlore

what was sweet?

No, the gang was not involved in that one. They were killed because they hid Jonathan.

@whalekeeper

woah! That was crazy!

Thanks for sharing!!!

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

@esther-c

Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!

@hybridlore

Yes. I did.

Well, you could….. I’d just have to write it……

@hybridlore

I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

@hybridlore

This is draft number…… 7. I think.

I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

@hybridlore

Do you!!? I like him too. 😁

I’m so glad you like it. I’m actually also starting to like it as well.

Any thoughts about the new situation Jonathan is in? Also, out of curiosity, what makes you like Jim? (I like him, but i know his whole arc. I’m interested to see what you like. )

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much for this! It was really helpful!

btw, Tintin is THE BEST. 😁

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!!

Thank so much for all the help you have given. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!! I shall take a look now.

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( @kyronthearcanin       @jonas      @power )

CHAPTER 7 and 8!!!!

Hi.

Prayers because my beef allergy is acting up in a different way than before which is a little scary (it’s not life-threatening, but it’s not fun either). We’re gonna set up doctor’s appointment tomorrow.

Thx.

@whalekeeper

So pretty!!!!

@koshka

Haha! Okay then.

Sounds good! Looking forward to it!

Welcome back to unfiltered thoughts from Loopy! Today I have a question:

Is lava wet?

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Leaving for my friend’s wedding in a few minutes. Won’t be back until late this night. I’m running some of the behind the scenes.

Plus, I don’t see any edits so I’m assuming only a few people got yesterday’s chapters read. So, I’ll…[Read more]

@whalekeeper
Is Enid your friend?

Do you guys have airbuses? You don’t use trolleys or sky trams anymore?

No, I’ve never been on one of those. We have cars and, like, normal buses.

What do the buildings in your city look like?

I am having a hard time picturing what Qhivzim looks like. Is it usually very intent on killing you? Does it talk?

@whalekeeper

Aw I love it! It’s so perfectly flowy.

Some day I am going to play Hollow Knight…

Today on unfiltered thoughts from Loopy that nobody asked for:

I made myself sad at work today because I was thinking about killing off characters and then I started thinking about how not writing your characters in the first place is kinda a form of killing them because they never got a chance to live in the first place and now I’m really sad…[Read more]

@koshka

Serious attitude as in he seriously has an attitude, or he is a serious character?