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TheShadow replied to the topic Summer 2025 Project: The Ashen Star (Working Title) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Got it, thanks!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you, and thanks for letting me know!
Some stuff happened, so I’ll probably be posting the first chapter later today.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Lol, if he has them XD
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TheShadow replied to the topic Summer 2025 Project: The Ashen Star (Working Title) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I’ll check it out (thanks @hybridlore for tagging).
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 11 months, 3 weeks ago
also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol
Lol, five might be a little generous XD
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you! I’ll try posting on Thursdays.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m good, thanks. Thank you for adding me!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
Hey!! What’s up, how have you been? I’m really sorry that I wasn’t responding for a while, but I’m just about done with the first part, is it okay if I read and give you some thoughts about the second one? It’s really good so far, Everett is definitely my favorite (always love a musical man).
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.
Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 12 months ago
Lol, that’s hilarious! Love the little interaction with Huntress, it’s perfect.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going. A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so changing that up a bit mi…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
If there’s any way I can help, let me know. Regarding the chapter, I’ll try to look at it as soon as possible. Btw, if you’re stuck, take a day or two to let your work sit and come back to it with fresh eyes and let your mind wander. That usually helps me when I don’t know what to do with a story.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
Hey, that’s great to hear!!
I’m so sorry. Praying for you and your family ❤️
Praying
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Thank you, and it’s okay. Hope the meeting is going well!
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
No, I can’t access the email I sent you. I may be unable to attend this one.
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
So… I can’t find my phone to access the link…
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 1 month ago
Why does it feel like the last chapter was more chaotic? Oh well, here are my votes:
D, O, 1, 15, Z.(I don’t want anyone to get out though… sigh…)
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TheShadow posted a new activity comment 1 year, 1 month ago
@hybridlore Your welcome! Well, Hopefully you’ll get used to it soon.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
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TheShadow posted a new activity comment 1 year, 1 month ago
@hybridlore Man, those kids are lucky lol. My school technically gets off the 6th, when exams finish.
Oh wow, how was the move? That sounds like a lot, I’ll be praying for you and your family. - Load More

Oh, gotcha. It was pretty good—we’re still settling in like I said, but it’s been a few weeks and our new neighborhood is pretty nice. It’s a lot busier than we’re used to though.
Thank you!
@hybridlore Your welcome! Well, Hopefully you’ll get used to it soon.