TheShadow

Ha. Ha. Ha. Little do these poor potatoes know the real threat lurks much deeper…

@loopylin

Good points! I just read the original Dracula this year and I loved it and the characters so much.  And it is a really good example of good Christian horror.

Thanks, and Dracula is amazing. It sucks that most literature that includes Dracula or vampires makes them either seem cool/sympathetic or in the right nowadays (cough, Twilight, cough).

@hybridlore

Okay, good. Eh, it’s just part of his personality to me. He’s great at Warrain and leading the team, because he applies himself, and as a result doesn’t really focus on school. 😆 His skills with computers and coding will be more prominent later.

Ah, glad to hear it will come into play. Well, I like it, it adds more to his chara…[Read more]

@keilah-h

(replying two days late… ugh)

currently debating whether I should do some of my other ones today.

Did you end up doing them?

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

Oof, it’s been two weeks. Well, here’s the third chapter, please tell me what you think once you’re done reading it. This is a shorter chapter, so I’ll probably post the fourth tomorrow.

Chapter 3

“That’s lovely.” Elina sat down, an uncom…[Read more]

@hybridlore

You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.

Thanks, and I think it’s fine because you don’t have to explicitly state it. Is there a reason why, or are you getting to that?

Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰

Your welcome. Is he going to have ano…[Read more]

@loopylin

What a coincidence, I watched that same video. It was really good, I too agree with his view. There’s one author (can’t remember his name) that writes horror as a Christian, and I think that’s good. Just because horror is scary (and at times, has depictions of really, really messed up things) doesn’t necessarily mean it’s bad.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sara, your writing is so beautiful. While I was reading, the entire time I was thinking “this is a beautiful sentence” or “this is incredibly true.” Your writing such wonderful truths, and doing a great job. Keep going, your writing is great!!

@whalekeeper

What if I said everything 

Hm, I guess I would like to get better at writing more interesting, distinct sentences and showing more than telling. I think I’ve gotten a smidge better at writing okay sentences, but nowhere near as using excellent word choices or stuff like that.

I would also like to show my themes better instead of…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I think so, although if she doesn’t I can send it to her again.

@keilah-h

I really like them, they’re good!! Nice job!!

@hybridlore

The story is looking really good so far, although I’m a little confused by Cole. Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school? Sorry, I just need a little clarification. Each character is good though, I particularly find Alec interesting.

@savannah_grace2009

First of all, that’s awesome that you’re writing this!!!

Second, I’ll try to get around to reading and suggesting things on this. The homework load shouldn’t be too bad this week so hopefully I’ll have time to finish it.

@stephie

Thats horrible. Praying

@theducktator

Yay, that’s wonderful!!! Praying for you and your brother

@hybridlore

It is a good word, isn’t it? Using too many synonyms can be a problem though too (probably my biggest XD).

@ellette-giselle

Great, thank you! Do you want me to post references for the clothes?

@keilah-h

obviously they’d have like separate rooms, but I think each couple has a cabin to their own. I imagine each person’s room has stuff they enjoy in it—for example, Sniper’s probably has a place he can store his rifle and knife, a large window to the outside (he seems like the kind of person to enjoy that), and some things he’d find fami…

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@keilah-h @rae @theducktator @kyronthearcanin@princesachronicles22

Trevor

Trevor hid a smile while watching Fairy and Silvanus. Next to him, Azalea tapped him on the shoulder and he glanced over. “What’s up?”

“It’s getting late, we should head back to the cabins.”

Trevor nodded, standing up with her. “Azalea and I are going to sleep now, go…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ooh, yay you’re picking this up again!! Here’s my character if you could draw her please:

Name: Elina Miller

Age: 16

Gender: female

Clothing: jeans, basic blue sneakers, blue T-shirt, a light green jacket, and a baseball cap.

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): about today

Physical appearance: about 5’5…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Going to catch up soon, but I noticed you used the word “glanced” a few times in one chapter (can’t remember which). It was just a little repetitive, not at all big though.