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@ellette-giselle

Ooh, cool aesthetic!! The colors work really well together!!

@ellette-giselle

Thank you, and thanks for helping with the historical accuracy (I will definitely need help with that lol)

@linus-smallprint

Okay, agreed, the beginning is not great imo, I will definitely change it, and the formatting. Thanks!

@keilah-h

Okay, that way looks a lot better, and I see what you mean, it is kind of confusing. Thank you!

@keilah-h
1. saw the Sniper video, it’s great XD

2. I’ve read more of the fanfic, and it’s still good, very entertaining (the loaf scene was amazing lol)

@theducktator

Great catch! Thanks!

@whalekeeper

Sure!

@rae

Thank you!!

Rowen

The lack of people was rather unsettling in the corridor, the dim light of the torches not helping to boost the mood. Odd. Rowen thought as he followed Emeline. This is all very… odd. “Is there anyone here?!” Emeline exclaimed, opening a door to a room and peeking in. There was no point in being s…[Read more]

Chapter one
Blossom Town’s suffering had only grown worse. The farmers brought less and less produce and food to the market each week. Daily, wagons rumbled through the streets, carrying the bodies of the victims of starvation. The familiar sound of wheel against stone brought villagers from their cottages or work to watch in somber silence as t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ooh, this looks very intriguing. And perfect timing too since I started writing my book… my apologies for the future pain you will have to suffer

@theducktator

Lol really? Can’t wait for that XD

@keilah-h

Thanks!

@freed_and_redeemed@whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr

Percival

A crash sounded, and Percival bolted awake. He leapt to his feet and reached for his sword, scanning the room. It appeared he was in a castle, judging by the stone walls, and red carpet beneath him. Castle! Lord Damien’s castle! “Come out and face me like…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Wait Sniper plays saxophone? HOW DID I NEVER KNOW THIS?!

@rae@princesachronicle22 @theducktator@kyronthearcanin

Azalea

Why does everyone seem so upset? Well, besides Stephen, Joy, Callum and Evelyn. They had only just come back from their search, and had found the others at the largest cabin, looking very uncomfortable. Fairy was…[Read more]

@rae

THAT’S A GREAT IDEA!!!! Yes, we should totally do that!!!!!

@loopylin

I think your right about the anxiety being dangerous, and thank you! I will tag you when I post the first chapter soon.

@linus-smallprint

I will, thank you!

@keilah-h

That sounds good.

@theducktator @rae @kyronthearcanin@princesachronicle22

Eldred

Eldred, Rosalind, and the group moved toward the largest buildings in the center. The wall closest to them had a window, and they crowded around it, peering in to see a table, some chairs, boxes… and some writing. Eldred read it over, then read it a…[Read more]

@theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr

Sorry, school has started and I was whisked away by it. Anyway, I will be introducing three characters.

Percival

Age: 19

Species: human, and from the fictional country of Terre, which is inspired by Germany and France.

Appearance: tall, muscular though more athletic than…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for the steps, I will use them while discerning, especially number 2. My book idea is one that is set in the middle ages, and originally it was to be set during the Black Death. Over time, however, I think this might be the thing I was stressing over. I was convicted over how dark that time period was, and how I might not…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I will try this out, thank you!

@thearcaneaxiom

Those are good questions, I will think about these things, thanks.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thank you! I really appreciate that, and thanks for the encouragement.

Thank you all for your advice, I really appreciate it!

@theducktator

Your first chapter is amazing, it’s really funny and entertaining.

Ok, some ideas. Maybe Linda could go to Paris, or some place in the world. She could go to the zoo and try to free a peacock or a type of bird there. Those are a few off the top of my head, I’ll try to think of some more tomorrow.

@linus-smallprint

Sorry this is late, this is answering the first question. I agree with everyone else, it isn’t the books fault. Yes, a book can influence how someone thinks but it’s what the person decides to do with that information and carrying it out, which is the person’s doing. If the main focus of the book is magic, then I would say that…[Read more]

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